Reviews for Capital Offense by Oroyukae

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katlady (Chapter 10) - Wed 30 Dec 2009

bravo....  i  am truely intreged by this  story  i just  started reading and I am now  wanting  updates


Waterunleashed (Chapter 10) - Wed 30 Dec 2009

Oh thank the gods they walked in when they did! I for one vote that inuyasha's opinion no longer counts when it comes to Sessh and screwing other girls. Hmm now What is Kagome going to do? Leave all flustered and not tell him that they work together or stay wait for Sesshomaru to calm down from his horny frenzy spill the beans and watch the very frustrated Dai lose it. Crap! PLease take door number three. I love this story as I love all of your stories, somehow you manage to crank out a well written wonderful plot filled story in a very short amount of time.


Snowfall (Chapter 10) - Wed 30 Dec 2009

Oh!  Poor Sesshoumaru!  He's about to get laid and gets interrupted.  He should just drag Akiko back to his room and do it, unless Inuyasha saved him from a worse fate than humiliation.  I feel sorry for Kagome.  This won't help her out at all.

 

I'm so glad that Sesshoumaru's parole officer didn't lock him up.  This is such a sad story.  Is there going to be any change for Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha?  Or will they always be oppressed?


Tana_san (Chapter 9) - Tue 29 Dec 2009

Hm, 4 1/2 hours from start to finish and I am now officially caught up. Oh yes, I am pleased.

So, our cold hearted Sesshoumaru got the job, no thanks to his conversational skills. Wouldn't that be a real kick if he found out that the one reason besides his qualifications was that he had Kagome as a reference. I just hope he never finds out. It wouldn't make it easy for them to be working in the same place if that piece of information leaked out. Oh please, don't use that. Kagome's good natured heart couldn't take that kind of abuse from him AND her co workers. It's going to be hard enough when Sesshoumaru finds out that she works there.  JEN


Tana_san (Chapter 7) - Tue 29 Dec 2009

And how many minds thought he was going to ask Kagome for something other than her thermos of coffee??? Hello, Miroku, I just knew it was him! I don't know how but...Poor Sesshoumaru is so used to being kicked to the curb that he didn't know how to react to someone treating him as an equal.  JEN


Tana_san (Chapter 6) - Tue 29 Dec 2009

Man, he was harsh, down right mean...I know he's had it rough and maybe she really doesn't quite understand the intensity of cruelty they've had to live with...but he. made. the. girl. cry! He's really going to feel like an ass if he actually gets the job.  JEN


Tana_san (Chapter 5) - Tue 29 Dec 2009

She's certainly one determined young woman and she sounds alot like me at that age. I never cared what others thought. If you didn't like who I was with, that was your problem, not mine. I never let prejudice dictate who my friends were and never will. I really like this storyline.  JEN


Tana_san (Chapter 4) - Tue 29 Dec 2009

Wow, did that bring back memories best forgotten. I moved from New Jersey late summer of 1978 to Springfield, Missouri and met my now husband in early November in a small factory. I fell for him in one glance, but when we finally got the chance to say hello, he said to be careful, the people here are real prejudiced and we could either cause trouble or lose our jobs for talking. He always had his breaks outside on the dock and I wondered why. He said because he was Spanish-Italian, they considered him Mexican because his skin tanned and that they didn't like his kind around "their" women. Well, I was young and could be quite mouthy when I wanted to be and told him no backhills country hicks were going to tell me who I can and can't talk to and I belonged to NO ONE! Let's just say that started a great friendship and yes, we lost our jobs for being friends but the reports were totally bogus.

I feel for Sessh and Yasha. If Kagome does indeed care, she'll be mindful of not getting them in any trouble just for trying to be a real friend. It's not like she can give them a home to live in if they lose their means of support.  JEN


Tana_san (Chapter 3) - Tue 29 Dec 2009

Ok, so that answered my question about Kagome, somewhat. This seems alot like color racism we live in today...sad really. We're all just people wanting the same things in life. Why does everything have to be made to be so difficult?  JEN


Tana_san (Chapter 2) - Tue 29 Dec 2009

Ok, first 2 chapters done. This is uniquely different. Youkai are a subservient race due to controlled powers? Interesting. I think Kagome is either being over confident or plain stupid. I can't decide which. It would seem to me that since this has been happening for years that she should be well aware of her boundaries, especially at night as she informed InuYasha he was in the wrong place at night. Hmm, I'm curious for more...Ta!  JEN


snowbird (Chapter 9) - Sat 26 Dec 2009

I have to admit that in the beginning I did not know if I would like this story line or not.  I find that I absolutely am ensnared by it and hope that you don't stop writing until it's completely finished.  I hate it when a good story is left unfinished and that happens too many times.  I had to laugh while reading where Sesshoumaru is warning Inuyasha about not liking Kagome other than as a friend.  I'm eager to read and enjoy as their stormy relationship slowly turns into a different direction.  I don't expect their feelings to change overnight.  It's much better when love is slow to flouish.  The fun is reading about all that takes place during the change.  Also, you must have a plan to eventually free the youkai.  There has to be an underground movement taking place that involves not only youkai but humans as well.  Since both Kagome and Sesshoumaru are powerful in their own way, it would only be natural that the movement would eventually enlist them.  Anyway, I'm eager to read whatever you have in store for them.  I'm sure it will be exciting.  You've done an excellent job so far.


Yudelle (Chapter 9) - Sat 26 Dec 2009

I love the chapter. Especially the last few paragrahs. I love the story.


Ceferadel (Chapter 9) - Fri 25 Dec 2009

Love it!


loveyaa (Chapter 8) - Fri 25 Dec 2009

I  gotta say kudos for coming up with this idea and turning it into this world that you're willing to share with the rest of us. I really enjoyed ur story. I am a little confused when it comes to the interview but hopefully that is clearned up soon and everything works out.


Ceferadel (Chapter 8) - Thu 24 Dec 2009

awww.. I really can't wait for the next chapter... you just had to leave us before she gets to the house *Sigh* :)


Sess Koibito (Chapter 8) - Thu 24 Dec 2009

Did Sesshoumaru really NOT get the job?!?!?  I hope he got it.  I want him to have to apologize to Kagome!  Will Inuyasha and/or Sesshoumaru find out about Kagome being a powerful miko??? Great chapter! :)


Sess Koibito (Chapter 8) - Thu 24 Dec 2009

Did Sesshoumaru really NOT get the job?!?!?  I hope he got it.  I want him to have to apologize to Kagome!  Will Inuyasha and/or Sesshoumaru find out about Kagome being a powerful miko??? Great chapter! :)


Yudelle (Chapter 7) - Thu 24 Dec 2009

Great chapter.


Snowfall (Chapter 7) - Wed 23 Dec 2009

Oh wow.  Poor Sesshoumaru.  He's so scared.  I don't blame him.  I just want to hug him and make it all better.  ^_^


Ceferadel (Chapter 7) - Wed 23 Dec 2009

aww poor sesh, he better start acting not as out their otherwise he won't get the job! But he better get it... Just wait till he finds out that kagome works there! I hope he can think better of her then... hmm... excellent story though! Can't wait for the next chapter :)


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