Was Sesshoumaru nakked when he transformed back???
This was beyond excellent and it definately made sense that something of this magnetude would push him to transform to his youkai form. It was good to know that he was able to discern the men Miroku was with were the good guys. I liked hearing how he felt and what he thought while in that form. I also thought it amazing that after all the youkai that have been freed, that Sesshoumaru is the first to achieve his true form.
You should pat yourself on the back, this chapter is phenominal. Now, on to the next one. JEN
;.; OMG POOR KAGOME AND SESSHOUMARU!!!!
such a sad chapter but such a good update I wonder how Kagome will react to all this once shes awake
okay you know the drill I demand up date poke you and you do so right
right
ok so UPDATE again already :poke:
its not fair to leave me on a cliffy
i love your story and you have me crying. please update soon
awwww, so sad hopefully they both will be ok...it will be interesting to see what Miroku has planned...
good job and update soon...
...NOT LIL BABY INU!
So sad...can't wait for the next update!
*whimpers* One of the babies died. That's so sad. Poor Sesshoumaru. Kagome is going to have a really hard time when she wakes up. I hope Sesshoumaru pulls himself together before then. And, I feel so sorry for Miroku's and Sango's situation as well. *sniffles* I wanna kick that bastard supervisor's ass! ^_^ Can't wait to see what Miroku has planned for the 'take down'. ^_^
0.o OMG again with the cliffy no fair...
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but over all great chapter
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I demand it so it shall be writen so it shall be done :nods: Yep that shoudl do the trick
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wow...awesome chapter...i figured that he probably would get to use his true form...he was overcoming the band he wore so that is a kind of a given. this chapter was done well...I hope Kagome is ok and Miroku and the others find them soon...
COOOOOL!!!!! ^_^
its sad and i so feel so bad for sesshomaru. Pleasedo update soon!!!!!
WooHoo! Sesshoumaru took his canine form. ^_^ *dances around.* That was awesome! He routed the enemy! I bet he cleared the area out pretty quick. I really feel sorry for him though. He's helpless to save Kagome. Hopefully, Miroku brought medics that might be able to help Kagome. When I think about her being pregnant and hurt...I really want to kill the bastard that's responsible.
Thanks so much for a transformed Sesshoumaru! ^_^ Can't wait to see what you do next. ^_^
That was AMAZING!!!!!
I was scared shitless outta my pants!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AWESOME!!!!!!
I felt so sorry for poor shippo and kikyo. I hope sess doesn't hate them for it. :-(
And for some reason i knew Sango would appear. But i see her actions more as her truly wanting to help he friend and love rather than trying to redeem herself for her past actions. Sigh....
Can't wait to see what happens.
~ Silver Silence 89
Interesting story. Its creative and amusing. I cant wait to see their relationship blossom.
WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!
NO FAIR!!!!!!
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I Seriously hope you know what you are doing to me
you had me hooked since chapter one...i am not one to normaly leave comments if its too good for words
and this by far has been too good for words...but when you so dareingly leave me at a clife hanger
I now half to demand that you update in the next hour
Seruously
you can not leave me or many of your other fans jaw droped wondering if Kagome is going to Live or die
she has Sesshoumarus Pups and you made him suffer
( brilinat i might make a story like this caus e then weer all waiting and anxious for the next chapter but still)
I just hope you know you made me nomminate you for the up coming awards because if this
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i guess I just half to tell you from now on to up date sooner
oh well it gives me somethign to do and in so saying that
UP DATE NOW!! I DEMAND IT!!!
okay too much for a flaming up date ^^; But I hope it made you laugh and inspired
Please keep up the good work
looking foward to you next chapter
Excellent diagnosis doctor! O_o
...whoa... i just knew something bad was gonna happen when kikyou left, and even though it was obvious haha, i still pat myself on the back. but you, you deserve an applause! this story is awesome if i haven't already told you, update soon!
Oh my gosh!!!! Dang girl, YOU ARE GOOD!!!! These last chapters have been so thrilling, I didn't even want to leave a review after each one as I normally like to do. I am beyond impressed with your skills at creating such dramatic stories. I mean, REALLY, you've got the gift!!!
Congratulations on passing all your courses and I only wish I could tell your writing teacher where to go because you have a great talent. No teacher is a good teacher that makes a student feel they haven't the ability to learn or succeed. Writing for fanfiction is excellent practice, though many teachers believe otherwise. Don't ever give up and always know how gifted we feel you are and allow us to be your encouragement when the teacher and class gets rough.
I'd like to get more into detail about what I liked but honestly, IT WAS ALL SOOO GOOD!!! If you've had any writer's block, I sure couldn't tell. The thrill and suspense kept me glued to the screen even when Mother Nature called and screamed to be acknowledged! You just keep on, Lady O, I can't wait for more....JEN
Holy crap, talk about a cliff-hanger!!! Man, this chapter was intense. I can't wait to find out what happens, Kagome and the pups just HAVE to be OK. Whew.
Keep up the amazing work!
Firstly let me just say, congratulations on passing all your classes, with good marks even!!! Very well done Oroyukae!!!
Secondly, don't ever let anyone make you doubt yourself with your writting talent! You are an unbelieveably talented writter! When i read your stories, i get so lost in the storyline, the characters, hell even the scenery that i can truly visualise things in my minds eye, THATS how good your writting is!!! I think every story you have written has ended up being one of my favourites, the other amazing thing i like about your stories are their always different from each other, not just the same plot line written differently, and thats just awesome!!! I always eagerly await your updates, and personally i would probably pay to read your work, and for me thats saying alot! LoL!!
Ok now thirdly, I loved this chapter!! It had action, which i thought you did a wonderful job with, and a bit of drama and even a little tenderness, especially when Sesshomaru and Kagome were reunited, that was so sweetly done and not overly dramatic!! Even Inuyasha got a bit of a staring role! OMG i soooo can't wait for the rest, hopefully Sesshomaru finally gets his hands on the idiot responsable for this! Eagerly awaiting the next one.....!
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