Reviews for Capital Offense by Oroyukae

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Neva (Chapter 67) - Thu 18 Mar 2010

ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo i cant wait to see if the cave works!!!! SO excited for the next chapter! But also worried for miroku! poor guy


Walter205 (Chapter 67) - Thu 18 Mar 2010

 So I was right on my second guess. It was Mikaru. I'm guessing that the person behind all of this is Naraku? Perhaps he's trying to incite an all out war in order to taint the shikon jewel, which may not have shown up yet?


snowbird (Chapter 67) - Thu 18 Mar 2010

Yes!!!!  The cave will be put to good use!  heehee.  That was so funny about Seshoumaru's embarrassing moment.

Oh wow!  Things are starting to come to a confrontation.  I'm sorry for Mikaru but I'm glad about Sato.  Maybe Sango can redeem herself by helping to free Miroku.


LM Bluejay (Chapter 67) - Thu 18 Mar 2010

When did they get Miroku??? T_T


moonlight's.kiss (Chapter 66) - Wed 17 Mar 2010

who has brown hair, who has brown hair? at least it'snot shippou... it can't be Miroku... gosh you always do this! great, now your excellent story is going to be in my head all day tomorrow. update soon! well i'm happy for the glee that they had for a couple days at least. Kikyou and Inuyasha are still too adorable for there own good, and it was so cute how Sesshomaru didn't want Kagome wearing Inuyashas' clothes, only his(: Inuyasha is so hot. sorry i wasn't signed in...


Anonymous (Chapter 66) - Wed 17 Mar 2010

who has brown hair, who has brown hair? at least it'snot shippou... it can't be Miroku... gosh you always do this! great, now your excellent story is going to be in my head all day tomorrow. update soon! well i'm happy for the glee that they had for a couple days at least. Kikyou and Inuyasha are still too adorable for there own good, and it was so cute how Sesshomaru didn't want Kagome wearing Inuyashas' clothes, only his(: Inuyasha is so hot.


Anonymous (Chapter 66) - Wed 17 Mar 2010

who has brown hair, who has brown hair? at least it'snot shippou... it can't be Miroku... gosh you always do this! great, now your excellent story is going to be in my head all day tomorrow. update soon! well i'm happy for the glee that they had for a couple days at least. Kikyou and Inuyasha are still too adorable for there own good, and it was so cute how Sesshomaru didn't want Kagome wearing Inuyashas' clothes, only his(: Inuyasha is so hot.


Walter205 (Chapter 1) - Wed 17 Mar 2010

It's gotta be Sato. Either that, or Mikaru or one of the other Youkai from Sesshomaru's 'previous' life.


iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 66) - Wed 17 Mar 2010

Oh crap, that last part did NOT sound like good news for our group.  I'm almost dreading finding out who the demon was.  This was another fabulous chapter, it's nice to seem some good in there, you balanced it out nicely.

Wonderful job Oroyukae!


knifethrower (Chapter 66) - Wed 17 Mar 2010

Oh, no you are doing it again!  You give our characters a moment of serenity before throwing them back into chaos!  Keep up the great work!


Tana_san (Chapter 66) - Wed 17 Mar 2010

Now this is where the proverbial "s*** hits the fan"...Let the fight begin and just hope that Kagome's and Sesshoumaru's training has progessed far enough to get the upper hand and destroy whose trying to corrupt and condemn what Kagome's uncle and associates tried to achieve for the good of all living creatures... Do take what time is needed, my friend, to make this just as spectacular as you always do. I am so looking forward to this part of the story unfolding. This is where the true action, adventure and intrigue begins...Sesshoumaru and InuYasha at their best. With Kagome, Miroku, and all who are loyal to only Miroku, this is sure to be the beginning of a great new force against the Department.

I'm kind of glad that InuYasha stood up to both Sessh and Kagome. They really haven't noticed that he has been vying for both of them to be together and happy. He may say things and do things differently but his heart is in the right place and he does deserve some credit for his loyality to them both, even if he had to go against his word to keep quiet about things he promised each of them. I think, too, that he going to make Kikyou a perfect mate and husband because he's putting her first and not rushing into a phsyical relationship first, before he gets her to love him. He's right. sometimes, it's better to take it slow to make it right.   JEN


snowbird (Chapter 66) - Wed 17 Mar 2010

I know Sato has chartreuse colored eyes but what color is his hair?  Do any of you other reviewers know?  I don't remember any previous mention of it before and this youkai has long dark hair.  Those of us who suspect this to be Sato, I hope we're all wrong.  Whoever this youkai is, the bad guy has something or someone he's holding to force Sato or whomever to do something bad.  I bet the supervisor is the one to watch over him to make sure it gets done.  From the way this poor youkai was thinking, it all just seems to point to Sato.  I hope Sato, or whomever, ends up being helped to free himself from the bad guy.  I couldn't help but kind of feel sorry for him.

It was sweet the way Sesshoumaru was trying to reach out to Shippo.  I have a suspicion about Shippo's surprise and I bet Kikyou is in on it, too. 


88pieces (Chapter 65) - Tue 16 Mar 2010

its about damn time!!!!! pretty soon something else will go wrong or already is but for this moment we have our favorite couple together and somewhat happy for the time being. 

thanks for the chapter

cant wait till the next one


snowbird (Chapter 65) - Tue 16 Mar 2010

Oh, by the way, thank you Tana_San for your support about the cave idea.  If the idea is used, I, too, am curious as to who thinks about it first.  Inuyasha or Shippo would be logical picks but who knows.  heehee.  Maybe Kikyou will be the shocker and suggest it.


snowbird (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Mar 2010

A big round of applause of congratulations for your win!  You so richly deserve it.  HIP, HIP, HOORAH!!!


moonlight's.kiss (Chapter 65) - Mon 15 Mar 2010

aaah, the love, the joy! i'm in love with this chapter it's one of my favorites(: and oh my God! Inuyasha and Kikyous relationship is doing too well! it is so sweet how they're getting closer and closer, and i'm so happy Sesshomaru and Kagome have finally got most things out in the open... still can't wait until the next chapter, Update soon!


Hairann (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Mar 2010

Congratulations Capital Offense has won first place for best AU/AR in the Dokuga 4th quarter awards. You can pick up your awesomely made banner, complements of the lovely Priestess Skye, at http://www.dokuga.com/images/awards/banners/9/5/1792.png. Congrats again and keep up the amazing work :).


Tana_san (Chapter 65) - Mon 15 Mar 2010

You have Sesshoumaru's character done perfectly. I can not only see him from your descriptions of his body but I can hear his voice and the style of talking and use of words that is only his.

This time together was quite endearing and they both deserve credit for keeping it restricted. I can imagine that InuYasha will have to get his too, for suggesting the ways to convey said love and reconnect from their time apart. InuYasha isn't one to go without some verbal acknowledgement for his part in making their night a rewarding passion filled experience. I wonder if he even realizes that Kagome still intends to reem him for not keeping his word about the pups exsistence?

Shippou is such an intelligent little guy. I think that being around sooo many adults at the facility forced him to grow up alittle to fast. Adults don't always realize that a child's mind is like a sponge, absorbing and retaining everything they see and hear. I know his job at the facility forced him to grow up quickly and I'm glad that now Kagome can give him a childhood he never really had. I also think it would be great for him and InuYasha to suggest maybe using the cave so Sessh and Kagome could mate. It would be funny to see who would think of the cave first as a barrier for the powers to combine safely.

Gotta go for now, sleep beckons once again. Oh how I dislike my morning meds.   JEN


iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 65) - Mon 15 Mar 2010

HOTTTTTT!  What a great reunion for them, they deserved it :)

I'm very curious as to how Sesshoumaru will be able to keep tabs on Kagome, definitely has to be sure she's eating correctly.  And InuYasha and Kikyo are soooo cute! 

Keep up the wonderful work; it's always a pleasure to see an update for your story, it always makes me go 'woohoo!'


1CarinoInu (Chapter 65) - Sun 14 Mar 2010

Yes, the end to my withdrawls.....  This is a wonderful update.  It shows the love between the two main characters as well as a little humor.  I love Sess getting his way to making Kagome eat....."I get dressed and the show ends."  LMAO!!


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