I like the ending and, for the most part, the story. However, I think it's unrealistic to have Kikyo moving on so quickly to Koga (although I like that she ended up with him), if she was supposed to be so happy and in love with Inuyasha. Even Kagome had a chance to think, be in denial and then finally accept the truth before hooking up with Sesshomaru. Otherwise, I think it's a good tale, despite the convoluted revenge plans, which made Kagome less likable. I really liked how SessKag's relationship developed though and that you did not make them go through insta-love; I thought it was realistic.

There were a few grammatical mistakes and typos here and there, but your story looks professional compared to MANY of the fanfics I've seen and read. So good job.

Loooovvveeeed this story. It was written well but it was still fun and flows if that makes any sense.

I cant tell you how much I love this story. I have read it twice now and it gets better and better each time. Thanks again for a great story.

*squeeeeeees at you* that was cute!

possessive puppy! love that!

BURN THE HANYOU GLUE YOURSELF TO THE DAIYOUKAI!!! o.o

Stupid hanyou! KNOCK FIRST BASTA!!! >:l

w0o0o0o0o0o0o0o Go Sessh! Stupid hanyou doesn't dissever her!

lmao drunken miko's are kinda hilarious! =x

yanno i really dont like inuyasha, and i REALLY REALLY hope that kaogme rips hit bits off. >:3

Other then the fact that your fic is giving me plunnies! *playfully glares* I really want to set inuyasha on fire stupid hanyou >:l

She should have kicked him in the hanyou bits! saved her self the trouble!

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I have soooooooo read this before lol. Guess I was a lameface though and didn't leave a review way back when >.< Sorry about that but hey it's still a great story!!!

Ahh!! I loved it. The song in the end really tied everything. Was it the inspiration for this story?

Kikyo and Kouga together...never considered it, but it looks like a great pairing. The ending was really sweet. I love them together. ^. ^

Gabrielle

Awe, I love how he said her name at the end. About time after saying, "miko". :) Can't wait to see Inuyasha's reaction to this.

Rin is really adorable in the story. Its nice to see that shes not a major component, but still a significant one, nonetheless. As for Inuyasha...ok jerk x 100000. I feel so bad for her. I'm surprised shes not crying her heart out, but some people are just strong like that, you know? :) Good job! I really am liking this. And sorry, I missread the intro, so my last review was off a bit. No kids, but still, at least there wouldn't be kids suffering through their parents quarrels.

Thanks!

Hello!!!

Ok, I'm going to be honest, I don't know why you said your writing isn't great. I really enjoyed this chapter. You have me interested. I like how Inuyasha wasn't falling over Kagome at first, it make them seem more human. (A lot of authors really make things into a sugar fest at the moment two characters meet- not realistic). Second, from the summary, I gathered that she ends up with him? I like that you made this unique. Most authors don't go as far as marrying them, and esp tthe kids. But you did, and I'm interested in seeing what happens, and how Sesshomaru ends up in the picture.  This is pretty unique, so I'll just continue reading!

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Thank you for a great chapter.

I loved this story. I really loved the end, I was a perfect ending to a perfect story. Thanks.

I really enjoyed reading this . And man did Inuyasha ever get his. I loved how it played out. And have been listening to the song White Liar on repeat for the past 30 mins.