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mikaelalucine (Chapter 8) - Wed 07 Apr 2010

Hahahahaha!!!!! I have some pretty big ones, good, please update soon!!!!!


Sprinks (Chapter 8) - Mon 05 Apr 2010

this is just getting better :D

UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!

i wanna see how sesshomaru takes her little stunt. and if he has any plots up his sleeve to get her back *grins evily*

 


sesshyzcutiie (Chapter 8) - Mon 05 Apr 2010

ii really liike thiis...

 

muy sexii performance to Sesshy Kags...

 

muy sexii iindeed ^o^


Alexandria (Chapter 7) - Sun 21 Mar 2010

will you please update. it has been so long since you have updated!

please update ASAP


Alexandria (Chapter 7) - Tue 16 Mar 2010

please review i cannot wait any longer.  I LOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVEEEEEEE this story please oh please update i have been waiting for so long.

i absolutely love your writing


michelle (Chapter 5) - Wed 03 Mar 2010

this is a very great wonderful good lovely story that i love and like a lot since i first started reading it and its very good your a verry great author who wrote this very great and wonderful story.


Kiyanae (Chapter 7) - Sun 28 Feb 2010

This story is freaking amazing so far!!!!!!!

 

lol don't mind if i do...TANK!!!!!!!! and not just cause kaggie-chan is in it, but the song did best do an intro.


Sprinks (Chapter 7) - Sun 28 Feb 2010

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I WANNA KNOW WHO WINS :D

IM LOVING THIS FANFIC :D

xoxoxoxoxoxoxo


molly (Chapter 7) - Sat 27 Feb 2010

I loved it, but it could be longer i like so much that i want it to be longer or update more or do both just post more and SOON!

Well i loved it i liked the songs and the detail to the songs keep it up can't wait to hear more.


Sprinks (Chapter 5) - Tue 19 Jan 2010

GAHH where are they going???

:(

update soon.

this fic is awesome :)

 


Arwyn (Chapter 1) - Thu 10 Dec 2009

Interesting premise...seems like it will be a good tale in the end.

 

I only have one problem with it though, and it's more in the grammer/style area than anything else. You jumped from third person to first person and then back to third person. This is not only confussing at times but can become very annoying in the end. If you wanted to tell this from a first person point of view, I would suggest doing it from Kagome's view point she's the one that has been used as a prop by both brothers.


FourShotChild (Chapter 1) - Thu 10 Dec 2009

So, I'm not usually into the high school scene with fanfiction. Maybe it's because I'm older... I don't know BUT I do love your story. Seriously. It's great! The description, amazing transitions, great grammar and such.... the list goes on. SO please continue this lovely story and I'll definately keep checking up.


WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 1) - Wed 09 Dec 2009

Uh... as intriguing as this is... WTF. Shouldn't Kagome care? And what will happen when the brothers find out that they pulled the same trick with the same girl? Why is Kagome so indifferent to the whole situation?  I'm interested to learn what happens next. Keep up the good work and update soon :p


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