Aww, you're not a fail.  I havent read many of the seven sins fics but i thought the first chapter was very funny!

My favorite part? "Property of Kagome Higerashi. Other bitches back off!"

Harharhar!  I loved your interpretation of the prompt and hope to read more!

Ducky out!

You definitely have wrriting chaotic dreams down. It was funny and very scary all at once. I hope I never have a dream like that! It was very interesting.

I love this for it's total randomness. I would totally have some weird dream like that. And the same reaction too!

Totally random, a little rushed and confusing, but dreams have a tendency to be that way.  Still it was funny.  I now have a mental image of Sesshoumaru's head on Sid the Sloth's body.  **shudders**  I'm interested to see what situations you come up with for the other six sins.

Random and kind of chaotic... definitly has the makings of a nightmare though... Sesshoumaru break-dancing... ack...not something I EVER wanted to envision... eyebleach needed now... aside from that it was somewhat entertaining.

lol...that was extemely funny, i wonder what Kags ate to cause those nightmares???

Umm really interesting to say the least.  It was a bit rushed, few typos here and there and needed a bit more discription, but other than that it was a nice drabble.  Rather entertaining.

Hairann