I adored this so much! I di notice a few typos, but i kmew what you meant ????. That being said, if you want, I could go through and fix those small typos and send it back to you pretty quick. Let me know becuase I'd be happy to.

Thanks for sharing with us!

Ezzie

This was a great work of art and I love it

short, sweet, with lemon-y goodness. LOVED IT!!; c'ya'

Just wanted to let you know that you have a real talent for writing.  I really enjoyed reading your story.  Please continue!  I can't wait to read what happens next! 

Love it

oh ho ho! stupid Yusha!

Oooh, interesting!! I think I'm gonna like this story ;)

Please, please keep going, I love this story so much and I cant wait to see what happens next. Of course they will have to talk to his father but then again he made it clear that he didnt care what anyone thought he just wanted her.

just found this story and i have to say for your first time writing it's GREAT

u need to keep up the good work. :)

Very interesting story you have here. Though I think you need a beta, I enjoy reading your story. (Though trust me, I need one too). So please continue your story and I shall wait for you again.

This is great can't wait

I really like this! It started off pretty cool. I hope to see more chapters in the near future. Until then, ^_^Ja ne!

Chapters are too short, too short! I want to read more!   I love it - instant sexual tension and attraction!

I can't wait for more!

~Sandreline

Good start. I'd like to see where its going. Update soon!