OMG! What a wonderful chapter!
I imagine that it must have been lonely to wake up after a night of so much passion to find the space next to you empty.
It would make it seem as if my husband only wanted me at certain times, but not always. I understand his reasoning behind the actions he has taken, but it still seems as if the loneliness experienced by Kagome during the day was a bit cold. I would have hoped to have someone to talk to, or kep me company, for all the beauty inside and outside of that huge palace make it seem as a gilded cage if she is all by herself.
The way you describe the scenery, made everything seem so beautiful, but at the same time so lonely, for she had no one to share all that beauty with.
During her explorations I kept wondering about nourishment, and why was she not hungry, but I was glad that you used that to Sesshomaru's advantage!
The sensual way he fed her, made me thisty and hungry for the same, and I know that there was no sweeter fruit than the one he would provide for her!
Her rebellious nature made me fear that she would revert all the work Sesshomaru had done to please her and endear her to him, but I imagine that no one could best Sesshomaru when it came to passion and the ways of the flesh. It is a bit underhanded, but if that is what it will take to gain a bit of trust from her, so be it.
Sesshomaru's seduction was sinful and oh!, so delicious! The alternating attacks on her senses was enough to make my breath hitch for a second! The fact that he was feeding her the delicious berries at the same time that he was tuning her body to desire was divine!
The "lessons" he is teaching her, makes me want to be innocent so that he may teach me forever!
I am looking forward to his next lesson with anticipation! Thank you for updating again! It was a most welcomed treat and a wonderful surprise!
Thank you again, for writing and sharing!
Hugs:
MidCat
K (Chapter 1) - Sun 27 Jun 2010
I wish that Sessho can turn invisible during the day, so that Kags can't see him but that he's watching her... taking care of her during the daytime ("in the shadows") ... wasn't he able to do that when he was about to assassinate kagome? When I was reading chapter 13 and Kags woke up by herself, I felt bad for her... her being sore and everything without warmth of sesshou.. it was like a "one-night stand"... sniffles. the whole time, I was thinking, I know sesshou is around somewhere in the shadows, watching over Kags as she stumbles through the castle.. but nope. No invisible Sesshou. =/ Where was he???
Anyways, enough of my rambling. Please continue writing (as I'm sure you're thinking about the plot and is writing as we speak) *winks* =)
love it love it love it you have a great way again of writing sensuality. I always love when the writier can write a story like you have. Plus I love the fact her spine is starting to show a lil more and that Sessho is turning it into his plans its very cleverly done.
♥ this chapter~!!! Update as soon as you can ;]
Kay (Chapter 13) - Sun 27 Jun 2010
Update soon. this was so good. AND it was HOT!! Can't wait to read more.
I know this myth (psyche and cupid) but is the storyline going to be exactly or somewhat like it? Or are you going to change it some and give it your own twists?
Thanks so much for a quick update and a wonderul read.
(btw, I've been following this fic for awhile, but didn't review it because I don't have an account here. But I came to find out that you can review fics even though you don't have an account!) ^^
Well, hurry to update. Can't wait for moreeeeee!
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