Holyyyy Crap!!!! Awesome chapter!!!! But I hate the cliffy >:l and I can't believe Sesshy was crying!!! Wow :O
God gah Kagome!! You are so stubborn. She is so true to character with her bull headedness you put in there. I like it lots. Can't see her being anything other than that. And Sesshomaru's timeliness to be there in time before she was attacked? Could there be some possible connection between them already? Maybe from the mating, perhaps? I did enjoy the idea of his anger being sparked by both her actions and those of the dwarf youkai. He got a wee possesive and authoritative and THAT is the lord I occasionally miss from this story. lol
The mystery is getting bigger and bigger around Kyoshi! The wee one is making himself a deciding factor into the direction his parents' interactions go. I don't honestly think it's easy to make an unborn child an effective plot device, but it's happenin!! In a really good way. Sesshomaru's first tears! Can't say I was expecting that range of emotion so soon. How will he handle this? How can he continue the same? Will he?
Also, I don't see how pickin up the pace (as mentioned here) will do any good to this story. From the get go, there was mention that this would take a lot of time before there was any hint of romantic feeling between the two. And it makes sense, there's no reason to rush that. There should be well thought out reasons to bring it to that point and I'm all for reading several more chapters of development. This even had an altercation in it that didn't involve Kagome crying into the floor and Sesshomaru leaving to "go get some smokes" (heh). I'm learning to expect curveballs from the author. She's good at that.
Poor Sesshomaru. That's really sad. I feel bad for him.
janjan (Chapter 35) - Fri 21 May 2010
WOah!! that was such an intense chapter! wow does this mean he feels what kagomes feeling like shes suffocating?
hmm I dunno i supose Ill find out soon!
Cant wait for more!
| *#!$*# that's what I have to say about that! Holy hell what a chapter! Seriously I wanted to smack Kagome. She KNEW something was wrong and yet she kept going. I understand her desire to prove she can take care of herself but she needs to be more careful. Sure Sesshoumaru should have thought about the language barrier but still he needs time to himself...this is just as hard for him as it is for her. I wonder if he is going to tell her he's going to release his beast in order to deal with the little demons? I do hope that the poison is gone because they need to get moving but I love the changing dynamics of their relationship. Slowly but surely they're coming around. Everytime I think I've got something figured out you throw me for a loop....what is that little pup up to I wonder....the ending of this chapter was amazing and I nearly cried over the fact that he was crying! I really hope you explain what he saw and what he felt! Best wishes always and enjoy your weekend and RELAX!!!*huggs*
Karli (Chapter 35) - Fri 21 May 2010
should have known you had updated you reply to reviews when you update.
Sesshomaru CRYING??? You know if Kagome saw that she could likely forgive him.
And my little theory from my last review, im not going to forget it mate.
What i want to know why Sesshomaru hand got burnt? Did Kiyoshi do it? or Kagome. and if the pup did it why would he hurt his own father?
Keep up the good work, I want to see them come to Australia.
Cheers
REDWOLF (Chapter 35) - Fri 21 May 2010
Woe, now, if Kagome could only see Sesshoumaru crying, maybe, she could learn to forgive. This was absolutely a fantastic chapter with endless possibilities!
kayla1232 (Chapter 35) - Fri 21 May 2010
could you please take it up a notch?
Hesunohana (Chapter 34) - Mon 17 May 2010
ouf ! tellement de tension dans l'air ! les passages où ils doivent se toucher pour établir les deux contacts. Tu écris vraiment bien en anglais et je trouve qu'on ressent bien les émotions que tu décris. un grand BRAVO !!
les deux derniers chapitres étaient extra. et je sais que la suite ne me décevra pas.
à la prochaine !
darkangel05 (Chapter 34) - Mon 17 May 2010
I guess Sesshoumaru is slowly starting to get accustomed of being a father huh? But I cant help but wonder what will happen between Kagome and Sesshoumaru once the baby is born. Great chapter as usual and thank you once again and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
Now I'm wondering if it was the baby she felt or the mark. >.< Great chapter and a nice peek into Sesshoumaru. I liked the silent interaction between them at the end.
Karli (Chapter 34) - Mon 17 May 2010
Great Chapter as Always Mate, I have a feeling that Kiyoshi is a full demon, sorry just how is he controling his aura and something the beast thought in a earlier
Quote from Conspiracy
but what he had found worried him. The weak, and new aura of the child was quite confusing; he had never felt one like it before. Also, it had a different vibration to it, and he didn’t know why it happened; the child should be an hanyou, and that did not feel as if it was an hanyou.
With the Aura control, i I just have this feeling the child will be a full demon. Even though i should be half.
I really like the bit where Kagome asked for help with her pain, about time i should say, how can someone go though that much and not want to get rid of it.
Again Loving the story and i know my theory is likely wrong. I Look forward to the next installment,
Cheers Matey
Karli
I think its sweet that he had packed some books, thinking of Kagome. She's always at the forefront of his mind, even if not for romantic reasons. It says a lot about where they may be able to go.
Pebbs (Chapter 34) - Sun 16 May 2010
You can almost feel how tense and awkward that was, for both of them. That was most definitely a major step!! Hopefully she will gain some more perspective on her own powers and strengthen herself. Sessh is finally becoming aware of his other emotions aside the overwhelming guilt he seems to always experience. Which will allow him to grow as well. I would assume that there are more positive steps to take place? Yes? Maybe?
Really good chapter. Thanks ^_^
| This chapter was full of good stuff!!!! I really think that Kagome managed to connect with him more than she realizes yet. Perhaps because his youkai is sealed away it just is going to take longer to fully develope. I'm glad that she was able to get a glimpse of what he is feeling and maybe she'll begin to understand that he does truly regret what happened and know that it goes deeper than the fact she is related to Rin. I was also glad to see that Sesshou does in fact respect her because like he said it's not something that many have come to earn. I am very curious about the painful aura she felt and I am dying to know where that came from. I doubt it could have been the baby but maybe it is somehow tied to the jewel. The jewel might be enjoying it's darkness and it knows that it can feed off of her and it doesn't want her to be happy because it wants her to continue to feel pain and suffering. It knows that once she moves passed it she will be able to purify it. I loved the interaction at the end when Sesshou was trying to comfort the baby. That need for them both to protect their child is what I think is ultimately going to bring them closer. Neither one wants to see the baby suffering and I think they are both going to do whatever it takes to keep him safe. I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Thank you for your brilliant writting again and as always Best Wishes!!!!!!
Tsuki (Chapter 34) - Sun 16 May 2010
Great Chapter ;D
Spennig (Chapter 34) - Sun 16 May 2010
Interesting. I am interested to see how much more they have to connect to help them both get past things. I am also inteested in seeing how she faces down his beast, since I can't see her getting past things unless she does.
REDWOLF (Chapter 34) - Sun 16 May 2010
At least they are putting the pup first. Great chapter!
Miss.Undo (Chapter 34) - Sun 16 May 2010
that was amazing i feel bad for her to go through that but her son is in pain! well please update soon!")
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