This is a very good story.  I can't wait to read the next chapter and hope it is soon.  All I want to do is kick Sesshomaru where it counts, but I'm sure that he will redeem himself later.  Until next time!!!

TT^TT  I hate you.

please updata

OOOOOOOH you have me on the ege of my seat. i'm wondering what's gonna happen to kagome UPDATE SOON! i love this story. those other storys like the poem kinds and the stories that have the characters playing different roles and not the story role i hate those. i like storys where sesshoumaru is mainly in his beast state like right now. KEPP UP THE GOOD WORK! A++++ work ^__v

I have to say I am not a big fan of the rape.  yes, I know it happens in this world and I know it is about power and control and not love or lust but still I just don't like the idea of someone trying to justify or glorify an act that is so wrong.  I know that it is fiction and it us your way of getting to a point but have to say I Love Sesshoumaru but when his charactor does something this bad I want him to feel some pain to.  Just don't gloss over it and make it seem ok.  I may not be a rape victom but I know someone who is and watching her deal with the act was heart breaking and upsetting so when someone writes a rape story I usual don't read or comment on it but you asked for review and here is mine.

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what gonna happen to her?!?!!  DX

:( So sad, yet such an amzing chapter!

wooo.... riveting, absolutely riveting! it's like reading a good mystery novel. the suspense, the emotional pain, it's there clearly stated, not literal no, not at times, but somehow you just get it. therefore, you get the whole picture. wow! just wow.

great work. congrats!

update please? sooner the better, but if it's gonna be as good as "sacrifice" then i'll wait for it longer. lol, like we really could do anything about it. haha!

The story still seems to be going pretty strongly :). I like the contrasts between Sesshoumaru and his beast and I think their interactions throughout the story has been interesting.

oh my god, i just wonder wen that bastard is going to change..... but the situation is nerve wracking, i am goin to wait for the next chapter, so don't make me wait for long. see you next time(figurlatively)....bye.

Hi, thank you so much for your note, it really made my day, just like the chapter, I can´t wait to read the next one. Great work!!!!!! Totally love it.   ;)

I really hope that Sesshoumaru gets control of his body back NOW! I'm a little worried about what his beast will do to Kagome to punish her, but Sesshoumaru probably won't care that she said she loves Inuyasha.  As much as I love it when Sesshoumaru and Kagome overcome the odds to be happy together, this story has me hoping that Sesshoumaru can just hold off his beast long enough for Kagome to escape to the future. Please update again soon. I can't wait to read what will happen next!

Hi, your comments about the reviews gave the courage to write one, well you see, my language isn´t english and I feel insecure when I have to write it, because my grammar and spelling are really awful. Another reason is because some authors like that in reviews people leaves comment or suggestions for their stories and I could´t write one even if my life depend on it, you see, I´m a reader and definitely not a writer. So, just let me tell you that I find your story very interesting, well writen, I totally love it and I think you´re a talented writer.   ;)

Well.....I don't think that last chapter was 'Emptiness' at all.  Very well written.....though a few spelling and tenses mistakes.  I like this story.  Waiting for your next update:)

just thought you'd like to know...chapter one is chapter two

Yes! Okay I may be considered a bit weird, but I really am feeling this story big time. I like alot of drama, action, angst, the feeling of being kept on my toes, and I really like the fact your story is giving me it. I love it! Great outlook, and wonderfully written.

Like five seconds ago I hit submit but it didn't send my review. So, to paraphrase, Have I told you that I love this story? I can't wait to see how Kagome communicates with him and if Inu gets his ass kicked. I look forward to the next chapter 

wow. sess is an ass and i hate him (not really) but this story is getting really gruesome and horrifying. i sincerely hope that Kagome gets a break and things look up for her.

please update

YAY keep up the great work I LOVE INTENSE FICS! i love this story. rape fics have more finesse in them. i like intense stories. PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ASAP!!!!!!!!! left me on the edge of my seat. ^___^ i freakin love it! lol

oh great.....we are getting to the point. and by the way your writing is a lot better, so don't feel bad for people who don't respond to you, son time is that they don't have enough time to do it, so keep the good work and update soon please bye.