Whatever you dont give up on this. It is a reallllly good story plz dont be one of those authors that start a good story and quit. I understand stuff happens but plz continue.
This is a very good story and I would like to read more, to find out what is up sesshoumaru's sleeve and how he's going to get her back?
Oh, you'd better continue this story. I'm totally hooked and if you stop now... Well, I just don't know what I would do - probably nag you to death!
I am glad that you updated.... please add another chaptger soon.
Oh, yeah! You should definitely continue. Pleeeeeeeeease? It's got my attention now. I remember reading the first two chapters way back when, and it was on my favorites list. I was shocked to see you had updated it, finally. Hehehe. Just kidding. Anyhoo, plz update again soon! I must know what happens. What happens to "The Kitsune"? And, I can't help but wonder what happened to "The Princess of the East"? And, why did Sesshoumaru suddenly decide he wanted a second chance with Kagome? All questions must be answered!!
BTW. I just love the way Rin and Shippo stood up to Sesshomaru. Made my heart proud! :D Keep up the good work! Can't wait for more!
Hi, let me tell you something, you are a Genius!!!! I don't remember in which site I read this story for the first time, but this was THE FANFIC that made me addictive to sessh/kags fanfictions. Your story is simply Brilliant!!! and I hope that this time you can be able to finish it. ;)
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Finally you update this fic I had thought was dead. Great story by the way! Though you made Rin sound a little retarded with her third-person dialog, I'll let it pass. I just hope you don't have Kagome folding under his seductions; he still needs to learn a lot regarding humility judging by his arrogant attitude with the, 'what Sesshoumaru wants, he gets', and the, "He was the one of the most desired males on the planet, he didn’t need luck." Oh, and please don't forget to indulge us in his delivered punishment to that meddling whore Kayuga. Hopefully you'll update soon and not have us waiting til forever!
quite a good foundation. laying the groundwork for a very thorough analysis of the situation in general. everything is quite clear. although you're not giving anything away with regards to plot.
perhaps, if the kitsune has a weakness? a sordid pass, anything to give an advantage to seshomaru? wouldn't that add to the drama? of course he has to really love kagome right? so kagome will have a difficult time choosing. but who will she choose? a lost love or the one she has now? and what about rin, how does she react to seshomaru and the kitsune?
anyway, it's like the typical divorced family dynamics. but this is a romance still. right? it has to end happily. yet convincingly.
good luck! more power and insight to you.
on a side note, there were little spelling errors, but other than that...
i think my heart was clenching while reading the whole chapter! it was sad, it was painful, so filled with longing and regret. the actions, the dialogue, the the subtext.
you know that feeling when you read those types of stories where the guy made a mistake and then he asks for forgiveness but he was too late? how your stomach clenches? i get that feeling. and it's hard to do that. so, congratulations! the clench-er was definitely there.
great job! i wish there was more chapters. 20 perhaps?
This is a good story. I sincerely hope you intend to finish this sometime very soon. *sigh*
I just found this story in Single Spark and followed your advise and started reading it on this site.
Wow, this is a good story. I wonder if Sesshoumaru will somehow be able to win Kagome back.
Heh, InuYasha is so in character here :D (But Ayame handled him well.)
Hi. This story is so incredibly AWESOME, let him suffer like the dog he is. But don´t get me wrong I do like him is just that you write so well that in this story I really hate him. Please continue whit this and give it an end, It would be a shame that it didn´t get concluded. PLEASE UPDATE VERY SOON!!!!!!!
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