I'm getting some very disturbing vibes that the whole incident is not over. And now we learn that Kagome is the suspect in her husband's death. Majo Yamada is a disturbing character. I wonder what she is up to? If I were Kagome, I'd just pretend like that whole interaction never happened. I'm so curious about where this is going to go next...
This is one of those times when that familiar phrase "Better to have loved and lost, then never to have loved at all" seems like total bs. The poor girl is in agony, and rightfully so. Losing Sesshomaru and her baby like that would be so horrifically devastating, it is practically unimaginable. But you have portrayed it so well! The story is painful to read, but you have done a beautiful job writing it...
Tragedy, indeed. Poor Kagome! Can she ever be happy again? It's hard to imagine, at this point... I can't wait to see what you have in store for her...
TruGemini (Chapter 5) - Fri 25 Dec 2009
The story is sad, yet you are doing a great job at telling it. The history synopsis was played well. Keep up the great work.
This was so beautifully written! Your writing's awesome, and every sentence was a joy to read. I feel extremely sorry for Kagome right now...could there really be a nice ending to all these drama? Anyway, here's wishing you Happy Holidays!!:) I look forward to the next chapter.
Ohmygod. I had never ever expected his death to come in this form. The plot thickens greatly with this, and now there are so many questions left unanswered in my mind. Oh dear the idea of Sesshoumaru dying like this breaks my heart! But it wouldn't be so without your excellent writing, so consider it a job well done! I love the way you write fighting scenes; it is so vivid, I can practically imagine myself there. Well done!:)
AMAZING action writing! Action is so hard to write, and you made this so dynamic and exciting. I could picture every detail. Great job!
REDWOLF (Chapter 4) - Tue 22 Dec 2009
What I think is what I know...sniffle...sniffle! My heart is breaking. I wish Sesshoumaru could come back to her. Poooooorrrrrrrr Kagome (wipng eyes here)! This is sad! Love the story because it is so well thought out and written.
Great second chapter!:) I believe friends are really the most important when it comes to situations like that. Be it a breakup or the loss of a loved one, friendship can always be counted on to save the day. I like the rapport between Rin and Sango and Kagome, they seem to come together so naturally. Great job!
Great going Rin, you get the blue ribbon for insensitivity. This story is so emotionally raw, I am having a hard time reading it (in a good way). I had to gather my courage before starting this chapter... You are really good at conveying emotion. I can't wait to find out what is coming up next for Kagome, hopefully things become less agonizing as time goes by...
Teana (Chapter 1) - Wed 02 Dec 2009
wow.. I was crying by the end. AMAZING! It had me thinking about my hubby.
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OMG you got me speechless with that. My friend was asking me why I looked as if someone died, and all I could say was, "Someone did." Oh gosh. Your powerful writing got my emotions in a whirl. Parched throat, speechless, eyes staring at the screen...yes, that's me right now. I wonder what happened to the baby...this has to be one of the saddest fanfics I've read in a long time. I know stories with one of the main characters dead don't usually go well with those who love happy endings, but I have to tell you how much I'm enjoying this. You've made it realistic; you've made fiction seem like LIFE. that's good enough for me, and I look forward to reading more of this amazing fic.
Zadea (Chapter 1) - Mon 30 Nov 2009
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