As always My Dear Elegantaws a wonderful chapter! Your writing is as always wonderful!
(Yes, I'm working on my story too Wench! But even authors must take a break now and then to read! So stop cracking that whip!)
Looking forward to the next chapters of this and TAoT!
Hugs,
LadySafire
(who is sneaking off to read another story)
:CRACK!: Ok ok, I'll start writing.. jeez, bossy woman!
*wink*
Fantastic! The suspense and building up to the final battle was awesome! I can't believe the next chapter is the last; it's been an amazing journey!
EP--the menace in this chapter is palpable. I got chills reading it. The tension, drama...the last chapter will surely amaze!
Violetcarson (Chapter 29) - Fri 06 Jun 2008
Ooh, wow. That chapter was INTENSE! Man! So much emotion, tension, and confusion. And now I'm jittery. So, it begins the next chapter, eh? The final moment, that everything else lead up to, I can hardly wait!
venus (Chapter 1) - Tue 03 Jun 2008
update pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee i love your work!
A fanfic of epic proportions, I must say. It keeps me on my toes!
Violetcarson (Chapter 28) - Sat 31 May 2008
Sadly, I haven't read this fic since chapter 22. That was definitely a mistake, but hey, at least I'm reading it again. Your insane talent always amazes me, and this story is the peak of it. I love this story, and I seriously need more!! So PLEASE, if at all possible...update soon?
Oh my gosh! This story is so funny. I love how you portray Sesshoumaru: all sexy and cute one moment and then...the icicle up the butt returns with a vengeance. I think you misspelled "Mother" in Japanese. I'm pretty positive it is "Okaa-san" san doesn't have double A's in it but Okaa does. You might want to check with Kodomo/Suichi he/she is pretty damn good at Japanese. I'll leave more reviews on misspelled words if I see them! I hope it helps :D
Keep on writing!
blair (Chapter 26) - Mon 26 May 2008
i cant wait update sooon
Lizzie (Chapter 24) - Fri 23 May 2008
I've read this on Single Spark, so I'm up to chapter 33. So, so fantastic, which means I'm slightly annoyed I didn't read it slower. Now I'm going to check this site out every day for an update!!!!!!
Tana-san (Chapter 24) - Fri 23 May 2008
Hey, Girl! What's up? Just started catching up and re reading this was quite enjoyable I must say. I know I've got alot more to read but I wanted you to know I'm finally home and getting back to my fanfic world. Gosh, I've missed you all!!! Lots of love...Jen
SWEET!!!! :)
venus (Chapter 1) - Mon 19 May 2008
pleaseee update! :)
venus (Chapter 1) - Mon 19 May 2008
pleaseee update! :)
This last chapter was great! I really love it that you incorporated quotes from "The Tao of Pooh." (Love that book, BTW, have the set..) Ending with Kagome giving Sesshoumaru the finger was funny, as well as a welcomed tension breaker. This chapter made my day.
khalida-dae (Chapter 21) - Sun 18 May 2008
I loved your latest chapter. Excellent work with a plot as usual. The only thing I noticed... the word 'gate' (when you were referring to Sango), I believe this should be 'gait'.
ff.net pen: khalida-dae
I tried to review but sometimes I forget b/c I usually copy and paste the stories to the word pad and read it at my leisure; my internet doesn't always work. I'm so sad that Single Spark is closing down =( but I'm glad a great author like you is still posting stories. =] U guyz make my day.
Langus (Chapter 1) - Wed 14 May 2008
Yay!! I'm so happy to see this posted here :) EP FTW! (for the win)
Since I didn't review every chapter on FanFiction, I'm going to compensate here. I know you already have my opinion, but it wouldn't hurt to reiterate the fact that this story is amazing and should be read by EVERYONE IN THE WORLD. It should be a requirement for BIRTH.
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