R0o, you're a fantastic, fantastic author and I am sure you know it. Very good writing there, I have no idea if you feel this way but the final sentence which said "Inuyasha was a fool, but he was not." was somewhat poignant and touching at the same time. I loved the first chapter, and sincerely look forward to reading more! I totally agree with Angelicatt's review - I hope to write as well as you do someday and hear the words "Well done!" from you! :)

R0o, I hope one day that I can write half as good as you and that you can review my stuff and say "job well done"...I don't think I could ever come close to filling R0ozilla's footprint even. But I'll keep trying.

A bitter-swet start that has me hooked.  I look forward to seeing what happens with the other six sins.