Wow indeed this is getting so very intresting, This chapter was sexy, yet dark, and kind of scary I loved it, I hope you update soon, I mean it has been a long time since you have and this story just keeps getting better and better, I can't wait to read more.
When I read this I had shivers down my spin "Because it’s a race. If you find him before I do, then he lives. If I find him first though, I will kill him. In the most brutal way possible.” Wonderful simply Wonderful, and yet super sexy!!! because we all know Sesshomaru has that type of power!!!.
Please update soon!!
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Megan007
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dude that was awesome, i can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work!
The plot thickens! Yay, I like this suspenseful fiction :D
So much unanswered questions! Ah please keep up the great work :]
Sophie (Chapter 6) - Fri 08 Jan 2010
Great chapter! I just can't wait to know what will happen in the next one. Great, simply great!
TruGemini (Chapter 6) - Fri 08 Jan 2010
Oooohhhhh, this is great! What could Sinner have taken from Sess? Was it Rin? Could Sinner be Inuyasha, or maybe Jaken? LOL! Please update soon. I'm at the edge of my seat.
LynnMarie1028 (Chapter 5) - Wed 06 Jan 2010
OMG!! PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY!!! I CAN'T TAKE THE SUSPENSE AND I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT NOW THAT SESSHOMARU IS IN HER HOUSE!! ooohh Will there be lemons?? And I have to say that this story is very well written!!
Crimson~Tears (Chapter 5) - Thu 31 Dec 2009
Question? Did you happen to read Goth before or after writing chapter five? Also please tell me the Greed woman is Kikyo. I like this fic although I've never seen Silence of the Lambs and don't plan to watch it after seeing the end of Hannibal. *shiver* Antyways update soon I can't wait to see what happens. p.s. I found that Hakudoushi's death reminded me a lot of Saw
Oh my god I'm so excited! keep going !! :O
Iris Ha (Chapter 5) - Wed 30 Dec 2009
Kai! you're such a tease! what a cliffy! I can't wait to see what happens next!
OH no.... A Cliffy... and a terribly steep one at that... *sigh* I cant wait for more, and what a gruesome turn... making a body *shudder*
Megan007 (Chapter 5) - Wed 30 Dec 2009
First Off, OMG Thank you so much for updating this fic or story I was begining to think that you forgot about it but I am so happy that you updated it, and second. OMG Sesshomaru is at her house now things are going to become intresting I can't wait to read more and I hope you update soon!!!
Hugs
Megan007
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Ooooo, that was just plain wicked....leaving us hanging like that!
I like it :)
ooooh that was a great chapter!!! I'm glad you got your muse working again, mines been on vacation for awhile now and i'm beginning to think she isn't cmeing back lol, oh well at least i can get caught up on my reading. Anywho that was a great chapter and i can't wait for the next one!
Lena (Chapter 5) - Wed 30 Dec 2009
NOOOOOOO!!!!! Why did you stop there? This is so unfair. It was just getting good. Anyway keep up the GREAT work and update soon.
DKSakd (Chapter 5) - Wed 30 Dec 2009
i really like how this is based on silence of the lambs. i'm a big fan of it. i especially like how you're not just retelling the book/movie but making it your own original story. so props to you!! :) the cliffhanger was really good for this chapter but excruciating at the same time. i definitely want to read the next chapter so please update soon!!!!!
p.s. when you had kagome see sesshomaru for the second time and she told him what sins the second and third victims were you said wrath and sloth where you had the first one be sloth. so it should have been envy and wrath. but otherwise great job!
Mindy (Chapter 5) - Wed 30 Dec 2009
Definately an origional story you have here!!! keeep going!! Very interersting and unpredictable
Oh now this is getting good......please update soon!
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