Wow this is great!  I honestly thought your story was coming to an end soon.  You've left room for much more!  And maaaan that Seiya is a DOG! Ok yeah, but you know what I mean!!  I did enjoy however him losing his "little friend" by her hands.  Niiice.  I kinda got the picture of her smilin' ear to ear and whirling it around her finger as if it was on a keychain and Inuyasha sort of disgusted by the whole scene of her sheer contentment.  Pretty funny. 

Also glad you put some more resolve into their relationship.  There's finally some progress with her ability to accept things and not linger on past events.  This is getting more and more interesting!

Hope you are well

Dear Ashley:

I'm sorry to hear you were sick, I hope all is better and that you are fully back on your feet!

I only have one word to describe this chapter:  WOW!

I mean, really!! First with that bastard Seiya, thinking that he is a god of some sort that can just tempt anyone into falling for him!! Trying to get Mayu to betray Sesshomaru & Kagome! The nerve!

To think that after what he has done he could be appealing to anyone! Only a deranged psycho would think him attractive in some sick way!

I knew Mayu was going to do some serious damage!! (You go girrrrll!!)  So I was rooting for her during the whole time! But then when it was obvious that he had some sort of plan, I was hoping that Sesshomaru would slice his throat to prevent him from speaking the spell! Too bad that was not to be!!

Now that we know that Seiya is back in an even more dangerous way, I am actually feeling a bit afraid about the whole thing! I hope that Kagome & Sesshomaru will realize the darger that lurks around them and will find a way to fight back!

Great chapter! I really look forward to the next update!

Thank you for writing & sharing!

Hugs:

MidCat

just when you think you know how the story is going to end you throw a money in the works! nicely done can't wait to see where else your mind bends.

O man...Seiya has got to GO!!!  He's become so cruel and obsessive.  Can't wait till the next one!  I'm really interested to see how this confrontation pans out. 

Inuyasha and Mayu...totally works.  So cute.  Their personas balance.  I really like that.

Great stuff, keep it up.  Happy belateds n all. ^_^

I've fallen in love with your story over the past two days, and I just want you to know how phenominal I think it is!

It's better than anything I could ever dream up myself, and reading your story, I get a great visual; you paint an excellent "picture".  XD

Well, anyhow, I was pleased to discover that you still update your stories, unlike the other fanfictions I love that never ever get finished...So thank you for your great work!  I am so excited to read the rest of what you have so far, and for what's ahead!

OMG,

I found your story last week and I am in love with it!  I was so exited to see an update this weekend.  Thanks for all your hard work. I am for ever your fan.

Thanks,

Mary

Seiya better die...  *glowers*  haha  Go Mayu!  lol  MayuxInuyasha was really cute...  :3  Well, keep up the great work!  Can't wait until the next one!

--nao-chan

Dear Ashley:

***Ahem!...Ahem!***

"Happy (belated) Birthday to yoooou!, Happy Birthday to yooooouuu!!,

Happy Birthday Dear Ashley!!, Happy Birthday to yoooouuuuu!

And Many moooooore!!

I hope your birthday was filled with joy and happines, and may the kamis grant you many more surrounded by love from all your loved ones!!

I want to thank you and your wonderful beta for giving us this wonderful gift of an update! And what an update!!!  Sessh & Kagome citrus, Inuyasha finally found someone who not only cares for him but can handle his rough attitude and cute puppy ways!! PERFECT! And finally, all the madness that is Seiya has finally been discovered!! HURRAY!!

I am so looking forward to the whoop-ass that is coming his way!! It is about time that someone put an end to all the evil he represents!!

I can't tell you how I am looking with anticipation to your next update and hope it will come soon!!

I feel bad because you ended up giving us a gift instead of us giving you one, but I hope all the love we feel for you will somehow make up for part of it!!

Thank you again for writing and sharing with us!

Much love:

MidCat

Kill him dead Sesshoumaru! lol. I really like this story, you write well. :)

Wonderful chapter! I'm glad Inuyasha has found someone =D Oh, and Happy Birthday!!!!! My birthday was this past Wednesday too! I turned 19 lol. I hope you have a good day today xD

O.o whoa seiya is psycho how in the hell omg i cant wait for sesshomaru to find out and he does something about it hope its not too late...but hope you update soon

Holy...  Seiya's gone crazy now...  O_o  Poor Saitri...  Hopefully someone will help her... like Kagome.. or someone...  Thank goodness Mayu's always there for Kagome...  Haha, Inuyasha was funny in this chapter.  Well, keep up the great work!  Can't wait until the next one!

--nao-chan

Sess needs to do away with Seiya - he is way too dangerous to keep around. At least InuYasha is on to him now as well

Wow... this story is getting really juicy!!!!! :D
the plots thickening and i'm loving it!

UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D

Can Seiya just die a very painful death??

Wow he is crazy! can't wait for more

Miko Usako

While the story is very good, you do realize that this you reposted chapter 16 instead of an actual chapter 17. 

I'm glad this chapter is back up. Seiya is a clueless, obsessed, dead youkai walking. I think another ass-whooping is in order. I wonder if there will be love between Mayu and Inuyasha. That is someone who needs to get laid real quick. Can't wait to see what happens next. The question is what will happen to the harem girls when Kag and Sesshy are officially the Lord and Lady of the Western Lands? So excited.