O_O ohhhhhhhhhh i hope kagome purifies him to the deepest Naraku levels of hell.. i may hafta stop reading this soon, the angsty is getting up there :\ and its making my tummy hurt! i may just hafta wait til you finish writing it b/c yeah i cant do angsty like this much more.

Looks like Kataru's plans have been re-routed North, which is a good thing, I hope. I still feel bad for Inuyasha. He really does need to get laid and Kagome and Sesshy are not helping things. I just hope he knocks some sense into Seiya though. He just doesn't get it. I already am looking forward to the next one. Awesome job.

grumbles stupid Seiya! i hope Sess gets him!

Nice chapter. Seiya ought to be ashamed of myself. He wants what he can never have. Yep, bones will be broken in the morning. Poor Inuyasha. He really DOES need to get laid. I wonder if Kataru will be back. I hope someone gets it through to her head that Sesshomaru is now off-limits, especially with the Eastern Lord not wanting to be anywhere near her, the little whore. You have got to bring back Mayu. And perhaps, Inuyasha might find some release with one of Sesshomaru's harem girls. Who knows? But he does need someone to care about him. Kataru is definitely not the one though, although he is quite capable of putting her in her place. Oooh, I can't wait for the next chapter.

keep up the good work.MORE UPDATES.

Will you be making more???????????????????????  pleazzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! make more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love this Fanfiction please you better make more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You are amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! how did you think of this Sesshomaru and Kagome I love It!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

... Wait who said something about not wanting a threesome? Man i am so disappointed it wont be in the original story. *pouts* Oh well at least you're still going to write it. Sex is sex no matter who or how many are involved. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work. lots of love!

loved it....mayu and kagome should have continued in their conversation....but more for next time i suppose

i havnt even read the update yet once i saw 'make sure to read important A/N at the end' i went straight to it, but i think you should go with your vision for the story it was going so well and im pretty me along with other readers would love the threesome that you had planned but ill come back and review on this chapter when i finish reading it

well, I'm totally against !!! I was loving this threesome !! really. but, I will read the drabble. how disapointing... (tears)

I love your fiction. it's sweety...and more (smile) and I the idea to have this threesome was really great ! oh, it's so sad for your original plot. maybe you should write it in parallel : you split the story in 2 1) what will happen will Mayu 2) what will happen without Mayu. It would be fun to have the 2 stories to compare. and those who don't want the threesome are free to read only one story.

what do you think ?

so, when will you update ? (eager to read the next chapter)

I look forward to reading the chapter about the ball. I was actually looking forward to seeing kagome and mayu relationship grow. O well I guess I have to wait for the one shot (that I hope you will post) to find out how kagome handles that.

what about sess and the captin?

and kags watching?

and please tell me when you come out with that one shot about kags and her lovely servent*smirks*

and if you can't fit the sessh and the captin make into a one shop

Normally, I don't review to the end of a story, but I had to review after reading your author's note. I'm just going to say: Don't let others control your story because then it is no longer your story. You should be writing YOUR story, for YOUR pleasure. Don't let reviews change your ideas. It's like theatre. If you're the director, your ideas should be the ones appearing on stage; otherwise, you're no long the director, but the stage manager. Sorry, that's the only reference I could think of. If YOU want to change your story, change it. If someone else wants you to change your story, tell them to kick rocks. Sorry, I just hate when authors allow others to control, not just influence, but control their story. I hope to read the story as YOU want it, not as others want it because I think you're a good and creative author so I want to read YOUR work and ideas, but ultimately, it's your choice.

I like this chapter. So Inuyasha has to grow up and take his place as a ruler of the West. I wonder how that will turn out with the gathering of the other Lords. There's one character that's getting on everyone's nerves: that power-hungry slut Kataru. If she thinks she can get into Sesshy's pants, she has another thing coming, especially now that Kagome's mated to him. I'm hoping that the whore does find her way back to the West and learns of his mating to Kagome and is finally put in her place since the House of the East wants nothing to do with her, especially the soldiers. And if she thinks she can use Inuyasha to get to Sesshy, it will never work. Not only is she a whore, but she's an idiot. And Seiya needs a serious wake-up call. He'll NEVER have a chance with the new Lady of the West. I wonder who you'd hook Inuyasha up with though, since he wants someone to settle down with. Can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^

Hi, I've been reading your fic Desire and I love it!  It's fun, it's unique and I can't wait to see what happens next.  I love your version of the characters.  I really like Miyu(sp wrong).  I am sadden that you are changing your story to fit what your readers want.  It's not our story it's yours!  I want to read what you had for your story, that's why I don't really like reviews sometimes the readers take the stories as their own, trying to make the authors write the way they want.  I think it's wrong.  I write but I'm to chicken to post anything if I ever do no one is going to take away from my story, if they do it won't be my story anymore.  If they aren't happy about it don't read it.  It won't be any skin off your back, your true fans will stick with you no matter what you write or don't write. I mean feedback can be a good healthy thing but don't let others change YOUR story.  I never do that to an author when I review and I don't review often, I usually review when the story is finished.  Don't let your reviewers change YOUR work.  It will be like my fans asking me to change my paintings.  IF they ever did ask me to do that I would politely reply,"Thanks for the input but it's my work if you want to make it your own then paint your own"  Or depending my mood "Bite me" LOL.  Your story isn't yours anymore if you bend to others like that, nothing will be yours if you bend to others like that in anything in life. I Learned the hard way.  Now I'm fighting back.  So please don't change your story to make others happy, you will be changing and living your life to please others and the only one you have to please is God and yourself, it's a hard habit to break I'm still working on it, it dosen't pay off.  I hope to read your original story and not read it in a oneshot, you deserve better as an author, You're really good, your story definately deserves better!  Think about it before you post.  The reviewers opinions are good to read and recieve but don't let them influence your work, it's yours not ours, if you do let them, it won't be your story any more.  I hope to read your true version, if not I'll wait for the oneshot, it will be sad if you do that it's your choice.  You won't lose your true fans!  I'm one of them now!  Until then Write on!
Much Love
InuAngel

whew

well i just love this anyway and cant wait for more, though i kidna feel bad for inu.bc i have the feeling that Sess is gunna make kagome scream all night long and that inu's never gunna get that out of his mind =x whihc would be awesome.

I have always ahd issues with SK sharing with anyone, so i cant say i'm not excited that it'll be SK with maybe some voy. on the other hand i'll be on the look out for that oneshot as well =x

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