Oh No! Not the last sin!!!! Can't we come up with a few dozen more sins just to keep you writing????
WHEEEE! A new ANYTHING from you! A gift for Wednesday! And I love it. I've had Death by Chocolate. I didn't react to it like Inuyasha but I think it would be a very BAD thing for a dog demon, or even half-dog demon. LOL. I'm going to remember this, Tenchi, and never, ever cross you, my evil Twin! ;)
She was still mad at the dog-earred half-demon from a few nights ago. He had somehow sniffed out the large flagon of sake that Miroku had received for performing a wedding and had hidden in the back of Kaede’s herb drying cabinet.
The shouting match and ensuing threats from the [girls’] girl's father
Blair (Chapter 3) - Fri 01 Jan 2010
haha, this chapter is awesome. Finally a real good cat fight :P
That was a nice example of greed without being to overt. Keep up the good work Tenchi!
Nysrina (Chapter 3) - Tue 08 Dec 2009
| Tenchi... OMG, Tenchi... I am wiping tears from my eyes even as I type; I was laughing too hard at the mental image of those two girls having a free-for-all...
But, yes, wrath it was! :D
LOL! Kagome should have kicked her butt good! That chapter was hilarious though.
I love all three chapters. But chapter 3 was the funniest. I'm gonna laugh over that one for a while yet. Well done!
Nice one!!!:)) I found myself enjoying it tremendously. Sesshoumaru sounds absolutely delectable *droooools* Well, I believe envy would definitely fit in well with the theme...I thought he'd only be envious of Sesshoumaru for having Kagome's attention, but the little twist at the end which got him envious of Sesshoumaru's impressive ER-HEM is just priceless!! Nice twist there!
TruGemini (Chapter 1) - Fri 20 Nov 2009
Tenchi, I love it! I believe you have described Sloth exactly. So use to getting the upperhand that he feels there is nothing more to be done. As if victory will be assured and handed over easily. Those who think to highly of themselves usually fall far and fast. Great Job!
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