That was excellent. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing it.
Loving the story so far; it's really, really good and interesting. One thing though. I know you said you've edited this, but I noticed there were still several grammatical mistakes, wrong word use and incorrect punctuation. They don't detract from my enjoyment of the story, however. Just thought you should know in case you wanted a clean copy.
Thanks for sharing your creativity.
What a great story! And to think that Kagome thought that Sessy would allow her to sleep! Bad Kagome! Bad Kagome! I hope that Kagome got that potion recipe because I think that she would want it for her human family when sees them in about 500 years! Thanks for writing this story!
You are a great writer. You deserve praise!! Im usually harsh but you my friend are only worthy of positive remarks from my person. Excellent!
The story was great and I enjoyed it.
wickedone43 (Chapter 26) - Fri 17 Jun 2011
OMG! How did I miss this one!! It was awesome!!!!
I loved the storyline, the progression of both Sesshomaru and Kagome's growth and how they fell for one another.
More, more!!!!
jessica (Chapter 1) - Sat 22 May 2010
i LOVE THIS STORY , I HAVE PRINTED OUT LOMNG AGO AND I FOUND IT AGAIN. TIME TO REVIEW IT. BYE
Creature of Shadow (Chapter 21) - Thu 03 Dec 2009
Thank you so much for sending me this link, I love this story even more the second time through. I am getting ready to start Remnants of the Spider on FFN and I can't wait. Also, I went and looked up your trailer thing on youtube and I thought it was really good. You could do that for a living! Thanx again!
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Rachael (Chapter 26) - Sat 20 Jun 2009
This was great!! They were a bit OOC, but you already set a warning on that. I enjoyed reading this so much I couldn't stop. I had to read it all nonstop today. I started at 6:40 and didn't finish until just now, 11:20!!! There were a couple of funny grammer mistakes and typos, but I kinda enjoyed 'em. Especies this one: " Once the well’s powers return, it will be functional for tree days." ...I wonder what tree day's are....hmmm, i'll have to think on that. I knew those trees were up to something, and people called me paranoid, pssht! Anway, I enjoyed reading, thanx!
Jazz (Chapter 26) - Mon 22 Dec 2008
| What I liked about this chapter was that it wasn't gay. The ending wasn't cheesey at all. That is so hard to do, especially with a romance story. So bravo!
| aww that the end? **pouts** i would complain more, but my spanish teacher is yelling at me (in spanish, v. quickly, in a way that i barely understand, god KAYATE, SENORA!!) so i need to get off my computer **sheepishly smiles**
wawa (Chapter 25) - Mon 22 Sep 2008
| How could you leave it there!!!! Great job though. See you next update.
wawa (Chapter 25) - Mon 22 Sep 2008
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stars (Chapter 25) - Sun 21 Sep 2008
| could you update
| Great job! Love the cliffy. Please update soon:)
| AWESOME FIC!!! This is awesome and so differnt than other fic's I've read about after Narku. It's written so well, I love how you wrote your Kagome's traing out, meaning she didn't go running off into battle, as she was, with her bow and arrow. I love how Sessy was jealous of his friend and Kagomes relationship, sorry his name excapes me, but I love his character. The traing episode, when Kagome finally took Sessy down! Brillant way to get them to see how they were beginning to feel about eachother. Also, like how Kagome dosen't forget her friends and she still mourns for them, will she open to Sessy about them and what happened? I know he knows but she hasn't talked about it. This is one of my favorite stories now! I love it, I can't wait for more updates. I can tell you enjoy it. Yep, sometime when we write our characters kind of take over and what comes out isn't what we intended, but sometimes better. Excellent! Write on! Much Love InuAngel
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