Nice! The darkness should come really soon because MissTeak absolutely dislikes the idea of Kagome and Inuyasha together. A man like Inuyasha is just so...eeeew. *shudders* LOL. Anyway, well done once again! Sesshoumaru does give the impression of having very good taste, doesn't he? Keep up the good work!

Hi jgem! My, my, that was a very solemn start to a promising story! I can't wait to read more of it, and would love to see where you'd be taking this interesting start. The last line was exceptionally beautiful. Well done! :) in a nutshell, good job for a first attempt :)

Good luck with your first fiction. It will be interesting to see what lurking in your mind ;)