Honestly, I feel like Sesshoumaru smacking her around was a bit out of character... so was Kagome's reaction. Considering she'd been raped, being betrayed like that and hurt again by someone she trusted, why in the world would she wish to go back? Maybe it's just that I'm uncomfortable with an author justifying a man hitting a woman like that. It could be my problem, but still... anyway, it's just my opinion on the matter. Plus, I feel like if I should point these things out -- it gives an author a different perspective to think about. And I know I've benefited from it in the past from other authors. Anyway, happy writing!
Alexis (Chapter 8) - Sun 25 May 2008
Please update
blair (Chapter 8) - Sun 25 May 2008
yay update soon, i have to admit inuyasha is infuriating, please have him suffer at least a little
(Chapter 1) - Sat 17 May 2008
jasmine (Chapter 1) - Wed 14 May 2008
man how can inuyasha do that to her.well update soon
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