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Kai Wolf (Chapter 6) - Wed 01 Apr 2015

It's so cute. Keep up the good work.


Katrina Kee (Chapter 6) - Sun 28 Jul 2013

Wow! Please update soon!


Charlene (Chapter 6) - Fri 16 Mar 2012
Very enjoyable. Characters portrayal was right on. I was so glad to InuYasha finally getting a spine and showing signs of maturing. I believe you ended it in just the right spot. Any sooner and it would have left your readers wondering if there was a chance for Sesshomaru and Kagome. Any later and you would not only have to a fight scene plus budding romance scenes for all the couples. As it was it felt complete yet knowing their tale was unfinished.

Mizuko Takayama (Chapter 5) - Sat 01 Jan 2011

I'm really enjoying your story! I thought you should know "Rin" can also mean "forest" which I think fits her better! =)

 

Have a great week! Happy New Year!

~~Mizuko~~


Sesshoumaru'sPriestess (Chapter 6) - Tue 06 Jul 2010

wow.....wonderful story!!!!


Scherherazade (Chapter 6) - Sun 14 Feb 2010

i just finished reading this story and enjoyed it immensely.  I loved the characters of Ai and Misaki.  Well done.


jojo661538 (Chapter 6) - Wed 20 Jan 2010

It was really good keep up the great work ^_^


JeniNeji (Chapter 6) - Fri 15 Jan 2010

this is so nice!


JeniNeji (Chapter 4) - Thu 14 Jan 2010

yey kohaku!


JeniNeji (Chapter 3) - Thu 14 Jan 2010

Can I cry? Poor Kagome! 


JeniNeji (Chapter 2) - Thu 14 Jan 2010

I am feeling once again bad for Kagome...shes such a kind girl!


JeniNeji (Chapter 1) - Thu 14 Jan 2010

Wee, this was interesting...poor good Kaome and I would admonish Sesshomaru if i could, he

cares too much about pride!


Miko Anna (Chapter 6) - Wed 13 Jan 2010

*Bows before the greatness that is Angelicatt-sama*  I never had a chance to review this last part, but after going back and reading it today, I simply couldn't wait.  I adore it, and you as an author.  Fantastic, wonderful, flawless... the list goes on.  I won't rant and rave, just simply say, you couldn't have done better!


Lexie (Chapter 6) - Mon 21 Dec 2009

awwwwwwwwwwwwww :')!!!!!!!!! crying but heartfelt. a lovely end to the chapter but i have a feeling there's more. please update!


Rowdys girl (Chapter 6) - Mon 14 Dec 2009

Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! I knew you could do it. You need to keep writing now, you certainly have the talent, you just need to polish your skills. There were a few things, I would have had more, but the power went out and I lost it all and I'm too tired to go back to find everything. Lazy me.

Punctuation, commas, periods, question marks, etc., should at the end of the sentences that are enclosed in quotes. And the punctuation goes inside the quotes.

Recounting his memories of journeys past,

When I fell asleep it was almost sunset

“Rise and shine, sleepyhead,” she    Sleephead is one word.

and deal with it,” his head was buried so low at the end,

I almost killed her, Kagome,” he dropped   Commas are your friends.

rage that you just don’t care,” she was angry

she could call me her ojiki,” he placated

Wait, I’m confused,” she

I guess you were too out

notice it earlier, but Kohaku’s

It was Miroku, ever the diplomat, who   Commas enclose parenthetical phrases.

The place at the head of the table sat empty,

 

It was a really good story and I knew that romance would bloom somehow!


Lina (Chapter 6) - Mon 14 Dec 2009

Beautiful story you have here. I really liked how Inuyasha finaly ended up growing up and Sesshoumaru realizing he did have a heart. Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work! ^_^


autumngold (Chapter 6) - Sun 13 Dec 2009

What an absolutely incredible story!  I love that Kagome and Sesshoumaru were honest with each other, and I love that Sesshoumaru told Kagome of his feelings towards her.  Is there going to be a sequel?  I know you said you were going to continue writing, I just hope you mean you are going to add to this story. 


Inumaru_Rapture (Chapter 5) - Tue 01 Dec 2009

I can't wait to see Part 2!  I shall be waiting with baited breath!


Cheebers McGee (Chapter 5) - Tue 01 Dec 2009

This is a rather cute take on 'finding Sesshoumaru injured'. I'll be reading! Sesshoumaru's instant love realization seemed a little out of character- but he's not one to really lie to himself, so I can see it happening. Now how he goes about expressing that love should be interesting. ;p Expressing anything other than annoyance isn't really a strong suit for him. And I read on babynames.com that Rin means friend or companion in Japanese- it's a unisex name (I considered it for my babe-to-be). I really like how you have Kagome portrayed in this- it matches with my imagined version of an older, more mature Kags. I look forward to your next installment.

Thank you for sharing,

BWise


names (Chapter 5) - Tue 01 Dec 2009

Rin means companion.


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