Reviews for By the Sword by Miss Kagura

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Kagaku-sha (Chapter 9) - Sat 27 May 2017

I really like this story!


Quiet Whisper (Chapter 9) - Fri 12 Feb 2010

ack here I was all into this and I go to click on the next chappie only to find this is where it ends.... anywho awesome story and I can't wait to see what happens next, great job Miss K!


JeniNeji (Chapter 9) - Fri 22 Jan 2010

This was a very good story!


upside-down_cloud (Chapter 9) - Mon 18 Jan 2010

Wow, this is an amazing story! I love how you explained Kagome/Inuyash'a relationship! She didn't understand his demon heritage and is finally starting to learn more about it from a very unexpected source. I hope Sess takes up her offer and they can begin bonding! Please update soon, I can't take the suspense! :D


SakuraDreamHeart (Chapter 9) - Sat 28 Nov 2009

Wow I really adore this Fanfic! I couldn't put it down at all : ) I hope you'll update soon! I want to know what happens :D I hope Sesshomaru actually does take Kagome up on her offer ;o

 

THANKS AGAIN FOR MAKING SUCH AN AWESOME STORY!


Tana_san (Chapter 9) - Wed 25 Nov 2009

Hmm, yeah, you never miss what you never had... that is until someone shows you differently, even if it's in the "little things' they do. I gather Sesshoumaru will find out just how important having Kagome around could be when they have to team up again. It also appears that Sesshoumaru is seeing how advanced his nephew really is. That's quite some feat to win a race with one whose speed is her greatest asset... I wonder what's next?  JEN


stars (Chapter 9) - Tue 24 Nov 2009

please updata


kas (Chapter 1) - Tue 24 Nov 2009

opps sorry! forgot to mention that fighting scene with kagome was amazing! i love when she totally kicks ass. ( i assumed you wouldn't mind me saying the word ass when you use the word fuck in your fics...? ^.^' ) again keep up the awesome work!


kas (Chapter 1) - Tue 24 Nov 2009

wow! i think i like this fic better than your other one Atonment. i think i got into it a little too much cause i didn't even notice the errors stated below. which is good. XD thank you very much for this amazing fic! keep up the awesome work!


Rowdys girl (Chapter 9) - Mon 23 Nov 2009

This is deep. You really examined child-parent relationships here. And the childbirth passage was great, especially when he kept his opinions about childbirth to himself because he suspected Rin would punch him! LOL! Or rip his head off. Very good perspective of motherhood, parenthood, and when childhood ends. You put a lot of thought into this, it shows. This story just gets better with each chapter.

Yeah, did I mention that I'm anal-retentive? You probably already guessed that. But the following are just little things that show you were writing fast.

The world looks (looked?) strange to Kyo,

his face was read (red)

which was all some wonderful lie lived out for his sake.

Kagome was her twelve-year-old son, who was almost as tall as Ren,  Perhaps: With her was Kagome's twelve-year-old son, who was almost as tall as Ren,

Kyo finally emerged from his lock-down state of exhaustion

 


FayeMegan (Chapter 9) - Mon 23 Nov 2009

Ooo an inkling of understand is starting to dawn on Sesshoumaru. I wonder where this development will take us?


autumngold (Chapter 9) - Mon 23 Nov 2009

I am so glad that Kagome and Kyo are getting along again.  They have both gone through such hard times that they deserve some happiness.  I understand that Kagome and Inuyasha fought all of the time and didn't love each other, but why didn't they have sex?  Was Inuyasha turned off by her after watching her give birth?  Or was he afraid to get her pregnant again?  Great new chapter!  Can't wait to read more of your story!


Angelicatt (Chapter 9) - Mon 23 Nov 2009

Ahh Rin had a booboo...I always knew she'd be a good match for Kohaku


Angelicatt (Chapter 8) - Mon 23 Nov 2009

Damn she proposed and he shot her down....Stupid dog makes no sense sometimes


Tana_san (Chapter 8) - Mon 23 Nov 2009

Never underestimate the mind of a woman...it may have only been 4 months since Inu's death but she has been in a one sided love with InuYasha since she was 15 and Kyo happened because birth control didn't exist in the Feudal Era. They tried to make a marriage and family work but InuYasha's heart just wasn't in it and they all suffered from it. Kagome's heart has been abused for so long she doesn't believe the way she used to. She doesn't want to be all alone, only to die before Kyo is grown to adulthood. No human will want her when her child is hanyou and she's been sullied by a demon and Sesshoumaru just gave her a good preview of what kind of demon would want her, seeing as she is human. I think this is a great proposition. He will be getting a miko of great power (with the right training) and he can make up the mistakes he made in his relationship with his brother by training and caring for his son. Sesshoumaru has no idea what a great team he and Kagome can make using their powers together and whose to know what a child with their bloodlines and powers will turn out to become. Was it not said how quickly Kyo has learned and is able to fell adults with greater experience and training? Sesshoumaru doesn't know by now that the boy is showing more advanced abilities than others his age? I'm just saying, Sesshoumaru is a strategist and a tactician, a warrior with a wealth of knowledge and instinct, shouldn't he be able to see the great benefits a mating with the miko could bring?...I also am officially in love with the character Ren. She is some sly woman and she knows her Lord so well. The bee biting his hand was priceless! And taking Kyo so Sesshoumaru HAS to be alone with Kagome was such a good move on her part. I guess she's trying to tell him he needs to get laid without the trouble saying it aloud could bring. I wonder also, what InuPapa would think knowing he sentenced InuYasha to live in a place like that? And is there any way to put him in his proper place?...So, I guess I'd better end it here for now. JEN


autumngold (Chapter 8) - Sun 22 Nov 2009

Didn't Kagome forget one thing?  Sesshoumaru wouldn't want to have hanyou pups.  With her he would never have a full-blooded heir.  He doesn't even like her, why would he want to mate her?  I think that Kagome is just trying to use him.  Why would her son be any happier knowing his mother was sleeping with his uncle?  It's only been a short time since his father has died, why is Kagome in such a hurry to marry again?  Will a few years make a difference in a mating of convenience?  Thanks for the new chapter!  Can't wait for more!


Dani (Chapter 8) - Sun 22 Nov 2009

Ouch! That hurt my little heart. Keep 'em comin!


knifethrower (Chapter 8) - Sun 22 Nov 2009

Kagome has grown up.  That's so sad!  I think maybe Sesshomaru finds it sad, as well.  When someone so passionate, who not just believes in love but is defined by her love for others, decides to move on and give up on the whole concept, it's just wrong.  It happens to us, though, doesn't it?  It's one of the things that s**** about life.   I hope Sesshomaru tries to bring back that spark.  That he valued that in her, and saw how much power it gave her when she was filled with the power of love...  That he becomes the believer, when she can no longer be...  This is brilliant!  And I am so glad you are updating so frequently...


88pieces (Chapter 7) - Sun 22 Nov 2009

i really like your story it has a good plot and i like the way its going so far.  Hope you update soon i cant wait to read more


Fluffy Lady (Chapter 7) - Sat 21 Nov 2009

aaaw! Bless Kagome's poor little heart! I feel so bad, i just want to go hug her! Now, missk, you must update because I read all these chapters in two hours while rp'ing for half that time. My eyes burn and I am going to bed and hope to see a new chapter when I get off work tomorrow night.

Until then,

Ja neh!


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