That was great! Sesh as a masseus. I do hope you write a sequel!!!
I really did enjoy this, but I have to call you on the claim that it's a One-shot. This is definitely the beginning of a very good story. I was rather disappointed, really. You have all the makings of a great tale and then you cut it short. You developed the charcters and their relationships before ending it too soon. You leave me with too many questions (read: Why IS Sesshomaru running a massage parlor?).
Anyway, great read and I do hope you'll finish this piece some day.
~Xunzar
lara (Chapter 1) - Wed 13 Apr 2011
This story definitely needs a sequel.
I loved this, and i would love to see a sequel but as a stand alone this would rock!
Amy (Chapter 1) - Thu 01 Jul 2010
STEAMMMMMMMY!
Jess (Chapter 1) - Sat 12 Dec 2009
Lol :) I loved it!
leonzite (Chapter 1) - Tue 03 Nov 2009
You need to do a sequel!! Pretty please~~~~~! You can't leave me like this... well you can but don't be like that---- expecting more from you ^_^
Sequel sequel sequel.... I wanna sequel! The story was great!
sunset in love (Chapter 1) - Sat 31 Oct 2009
sequel please... better yet, why not make it into a fluffy chapter, something out of the ordinary... with the simplest yet most addicting plot....you are great at this!
You succeeded in your goal, this was VERY hot! Thus proving that the most important sex organ is the brain. I need a cold shower.
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