This may seem like a very silly reason for writing a review, but I was very impressed with a proper use of the word "crapulous"! I am a linguist by trade and by nature, so the correct usage of one of the most fun words in the English language excites me.. ^^ Thank you for using it!

Cool chapter 2! I'm liking how this story is shaping up. Keep up the great work tenchi!

Great first chapter! So the West is being invaded by pirates? Definitely something worth pursuing.

Oooh pirates! Very interesting story line. This is exciting, I can only imagine what will happen next.