I wish that Kagome didn't want people to hate her.  She might think that she is saving them from missing her after she's gone, but actually she is punishing them by not letting them know her.  Very interesting beginning to your story.  Please post more!

this was so enthraling i actually missed the fact that i was pressing the next chapter button :3 i like this please continue and for your first it has promise! Ja ne Aimee-chan

This plot reminds me of "A Walk to Remember". Am I right? --- I think so far you're doing a great job! Everything seems editted and flows. I'm enjoying it. I just hate the fact that she's going to die in the end (if we're falling the movie). Good luck!

this is one of the most awesomely written fiction... and i really loved it... really sorry to heard such things happened... but i'll share something with you, i had a friends, a very closed boy friend with whom i used to do a lot of things... he was one of the greatest friend that i wioll never forget, we used to hangout, and do everything together, sadly, he is no longer with me... he is no longer around... and it hurts to remember, really really hurt.... but i will remember him, and i will cherished the memories forever....

Inspiration was a walk to remember? Nice, I wanna see what you do with it. :)