AMBER! *SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES@you!*
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OMg thats the bestest ever! and Kagome being all showy >:3 so awesome! i bet inupapa's like....
My son, is a Kami.... SO AWESOME! oh his mother's gunna be all 0o0o0o0o0o I birthed that!
YUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
*wiggles update bribery c0okies at you*
lots of them!
ah! I can't believe I didn't think to find this story here on Dokuga before now! *faceplants* Ah well... better late than never. ^_^
I'm not usually a fan of battle scenes; it took me Years to do more than skim through the massive army fights in Lord of the Rings. That in mind, I really enjoyed yours for some reason. Perhaps because the 'good guys' were on the ball and ready for a change or even that people that usually don't get along were really showing they could get along even if only for this. Or maybe just the writing style. ^_^ Whatever the reason, I'm really looking forward to the rest of the battle -and for more than just 'when will our new kami join their army' as I was before.
Thanks so much for writing!
Shezna (Chapter 66) - Wed 09 Feb 2011
So I've just finished reading this whole thing so far, I just couldn't stop reading! *squees* I love your plot twists and turns :D can't wait to read more!! *sits on edge of seat* I can't wait to see how Kagome balances out reality.
Tiegrsi (Chapter 66) - Tue 08 Feb 2011
That was a great begining for the battle. I am glad to see some kind of numbers put out on the opposing army...the last numbers you gave were something like 800 I think and that seemed like not very much considering how many youkai, half demons and humans there must be on "our side". Having substantial numbers stated makes the battle feel more epic...up until the point when you mentioned 3,000 being swallowed by Naoko's trap, I was feeling like it wouldn't be much of a battle. Good luck with the next several chapters! I'm really enjoying this story and look forward tyo reading more. :D
Like I said before, part of a good battle scene is the building up to it. This you have done magnificently. Most stories just launch you into a battle with little or no build-up. The build-up IS part of the battle. I think yours is the best I've read.
Loveyaa (Chapter 66) - Tue 08 Feb 2011
Its still quite a wonderous build up/lead in. So much is going on and I think you are doing a fantastic job of keeping track of everything and covering everything. Everything still holds its interests and I know the battle will just be EPIC!! I can't wait for this 3 chapter long battle and im wondering when the dynamic duo will make their apperance. Probably the end and then take all the credit for it :)
Awesome battle! you said three chapters, well i look forward to all of them and just because i love llemons i hope they show up again for this story, hehe. I wish there had been some Kagome and Sesshomaru, but hopefully they'll show up in a dramatic fasion adn win a large part of the war. Can't wait to see the next chapter!
*raises flag for SK and Segumi and Cheers!* HAZZAH!!!!
good start! i cant wait to see more! and OMG when SK get there... hahahahahaha
So amazing!
Please take care of yourself! As much as we'd love to see the story continued, your health is of the utmost importance!
I hope you feel better soon.
Loveyaa (Chapter 65) - Fri 21 Jan 2011
And we're so close I can taste it. I can't wait to see what happens next. The good guys will win of course but Im excited to see just exactly how you paint it. I think its interesting that you had Kagome mate Sesshoumaru but whatever floats your boat...and it looks like that boat will never be sunk. Here's looking to the greatest family reunion for a moment for the history books :)
Yes! Another beautiful chapter in my favorite story. I loved how you wrote the lemon scene and bonding in this chapter. It was almost like you could really feel what they were feeling due to your description. God I love this story!
So sorry to hear about your accident Ber but am thrilled that you are doing okay. I have missed you and your regular taking me to task on reviewing without logins. How will I ever remember if you don't say it? LOL! Feel better sweetheart. Tru still loves you!!
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