This was a very entertaining read I must say, I love Halloween, and this story did it justice I must say :D. You carried the suspence beautifully, and everything was very well detailed. Wonderful job!!

This was dark, and you carried the suspence really well! It was slightly confusing, although I suppose all horror movies are, but a bit more description of what's going on might make it a bit easier to follow. Your grammar and spelling were really good, and you pulled off the high school frat party without makig it cliche!

I loved this story, it reminds me of B-rated horror movies, and I don't mean that in a bad way, I love B-rated horror movies.  The suspence was done extremely well and it is one of the hardest to write.  You give just enough to keep us on the edge of our seats without giving it away.  Great job and I hope to read more from you in the future. 

Wow, really creapy and a wonderful holloween story.  It was very detailed and thrilling.  It definitely left me wanting more.  Were the other howls Ayame and the others that caught the apples with ease? This was really cool, I enjoyed reading it.

yay! an awesome halloween story in August! I'm soooooo ready for fall, and Halloween is my fave holiday, so this story was right up my alley. I Just wish I was a little clearer on a few things (and it could just be ME, as I'm running on less than 4 hours of sleep... thank you terrible 2s) okay so 1) did they know they were turning? 2) why did they turn? 3) what happens once everyone wakes up and kagomes all mince meat?! 4) What was going on with the rock that Hojo threw? I didnt get kagomes confusion which only confused me lol a paradox