Nice idea and a good start.  There are some spelling and grammar issues throughout, a beta could help you with that.  Every writer benefits from a beta.  I would suggest you slow down a bit.  For me everything was very rushed.  Add more details and descriptions, flesh out your characters more.  I think you have the beginnings of an interesting story, that will be especially appealing to the younger crowd on Dokuga.

Well you've got an interesting start here. However I would suggest slowing down and filling in the chapters with a little more detail because they seem to jump around from one topic to the next in a very rushed manner. Detail is the key to any story, and you have the beginnings going they just need to be fleshed out a bit. You have everything set up pretty well so it is easy to read, but there are several spelling and grammar mistakes, I would recomend either an editing session, or enlist the help of a good beta. You have the beginnings of a good story here, I do hope you will continue this work soon, and i wish you all the best:D

This seems like a very interesting story. I would really recommend getting a beta. You have a lot of spelling and grammar issues. You should watch your punctuation and tense on a lot of words. You mix up words like 'your/you're and their/they're/there.' These things are easy to do. A good beta will also be someone that you can bounce ideas off of. You should really try to slow stuff down. There is no hurry. Try to outline your plot, and get everything broken down by chapter. You really should try to paint a picture with words, don't be too stingy with them. I know a lot of writers want to get right into the action, but it is important to set the stage. I think that making sure to really get the author involved with the setting is important, try to remember.

Anyways, I hope you keep writing. Good luck!

This story seems to have gotten it's start from another anime/manga that I read regularly, Rosario & Vampire; where the lone human gets accepted to Youkai Academy, the high school for all the hidden demons. I am guessing that this is AU since all of the characters are there, except Shippo has been replaced by Ai; who by the way should never speak in all caps - it makes it quite difficult to read. Ch 1 started off well but you rushed through Ch 2 so fast I had to read it twice. How is it that Bankotsu is telling them the story of Naraku and the Inu-tachi and Kagome does not think it strange that all the names are the same as hers and the people she's just met?? How does she know Naraku? What's their history together?? Why did Sesshoumaru save her?

Take it slow, flesh out your characters and places...information is key...but please keep writing.

Noticed a few things I thought I should point out, the story seemed rather rushed to me and I would suggest trying to slow down a bit.  I would recommend adding more details, as it tends to help slow down the story.  Careful with your puncuation during dialog, it should always be placed before the " not after.  For example ," instead of ",.  Try to stay away from words in all caps, as it tends to interupt the flow of the story and any number ten and under, should always be spelled out.  I think you have an interesting start for a story here and with a bit of work, could be come a very enjoyable read.