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Ash (Chapter 11) - Sun 29 Nov 2009

Finally! This was the perfect ending to this chapter. Everyone dislikes Inuyasha now I'm sure! You did not disappoint my dear!


Tara-Yomitorika (Chapter 11) - Sun 29 Nov 2009

ugh! So, before when I said I wanted to smack Kagome? Forget it! I would give my left foot to be able to smack Inuyasha right upside the head! He's such a ... a..... DINGLEBERRY! Gah! However, since giving up my left foot wouldn't give me the ability to smack Inuyasha upside the head, I demand an update. SOON!

Kokubetsu,

Tara-Yomitorika


Patricia (Chapter 11) - Sun 29 Nov 2009

That was a wonderful chapter!! i absolutly loved it. cant wait for the next update. so much drama! how is she gonna be with sess now??


JessiCeleste89 (Chapter 11) - Sun 29 Nov 2009

Finally its all out in the open. I just wonder whats going to happen next. I cant wait! Great chpt!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 11) - Sun 29 Nov 2009

Perfection. You have outdone yourself. I love this story and chapter 10 fit very well with the rest of the story. It gave some insight into the main ladies; their thoughts and feelings. In my opinion, it imbued more substance to the story and did not take anything away. Brilliant. My heart breaks for Kagome and Sess and Kikyou but I feel nothing but pitty and contempt for InuYasha; I even feel a little sorry for Kaguya. I can hardly wait for the next installments. Many hugs and smiles from your friend :)


Noacat (Chapter 11) - Sun 29 Nov 2009

Omigod. I knew it would all end but not so publicly. I mean, it blew UP. Wow. It was like my heart stopped when I read it.


Inu Guardian (Chapter 11) - Sun 29 Nov 2009

*sobs uncontrollably* Poor Kagome and Kikyou!  They really should not have found out about each other in such a manner.  Stupid Inuyasha.  I feel so bad for the both of them.  Kikyou for being so obliviously happy and to have such a bombshell dropped on her like that.  And Kagome, going through all of that with Inuyasha....I hope everything will work out for them.


sesshys_jaded_samuri (Chapter 11) - Sun 29 Nov 2009
OH MY! This chapter was heartrending! I do hope to read the next one soon!

LoveSessho4Evah (Chapter 11) - Sun 29 Nov 2009

Oh. My. God.

 

Now that was a hell of a chapter. I'm left speechless


redoxide (Chapter 11) - Sun 29 Nov 2009

I think my heart went into double time when I saw the title of this chapter! Wow, the anticipation has been building up like water in dam and now...it seems almost like a relief that it's all out in the open. I can't wait to see how the rest of the confrontation plays out. I'm really curious how Kikyou will react once the initial shock has worn off. You did the awkward tension so well!


knifethrower (Chapter 11) - Sun 29 Nov 2009

Don't take this wrong, but the emotional build-up of this story has been making me think of the Steven King movie "Carrie".  That long slow build-up toward the girl's total emotional devastation.  This chapter was that moment from "Carrie" that I was both dreading and looking forward to, the big train wreck!  Excellent, and understated!  You are unmatched for both depth of emotion and your beautiful powers of description.  You are the best!


miwa03 (Chapter 11) - Sun 29 Nov 2009

You made my eyes bulged when I saw you update Teak! And I clicked your story while bracing my heart to prepare for the worst...

Amazing... Your story has the power to make me feel this way. Please Teak no more tragedy... I love reading your story but I don't think I could survive another heartache...

Yap, your writting definitely has the power to affect my feeling.

Keep on writting girl!

~miwa


Ava 365 (Chapter 11) - Sun 29 Nov 2009

Is it really the end for Kagome? She won't take him back again? Perhaps she will take sometime to pull herself together before she can see Sesshomaru as more than a friend. Inuyasha is very easy to despise in this story. And I hope Kikyo dumps him too. Although I think Kagome is to blame just as much as Inuyasha. OK, she ollowed her heart expecting Inuyasha to choose her. But three years is more than long enough to realise that would never hapen, hell even a year is too long. And she has been selfish too, the way she used Sesshomaru can't be forgotten nor fogiven.  


Yohko (Chapter 11) - Sun 29 Nov 2009

Amazing chapter! I can't wait to find out how Kagome will take the news... Will she regain her previous "relationship" with Sess? Disapper? Try to kill her self? Be aloof? There are so many possibilities. Update soon!


RayRay (Chapter 10) - Mon 23 Nov 2009

Late review, sorry dearie, college and the pups had be super busy. But now I have time to read and review, yay! This chapter was so well-written and I enjoyed reading things from the girls in the stories points of views. Poor Kikyou, her instincts were so right but she just doesn't know it yet. Then Kaguya, she can't have Sesshomaru like she wants and knows he still loves the 'other girl' from before. The end for hers had me going "aww". I'm gonna skip Kagome's for a moment so comment on Izayoi, who was also so right-on in what she knew but was just missing a few vital details to help her figure out what was really going on! What a smart woman she is! Teehee, ok now I'll comment on Kagome, who had me wanting to reach in and shake for a moment. The girl is doing EXACTLY what she was going to accuse Kaguya of doing to Sesshomaru. After the recap it was so clear to see that she had done nothing but use him the entire time, the poor guy. Though her hanging up on him was not nice :P but it was probably the right thing to do at that point in time. Anyways, I was excited to see the update and I can't wait to read the next chapter and see what you have happen. Loved it lots, and as always, it was immensely enjoyable. Much love to you deary <333


Ava 365 (Chapter 10) - Mon 23 Nov 2009

I really don't understand how people (especially women) accept to be second best even when they have evidence! I couldn't be with someone that wasn't 100% with me. I really don't understand what type of self respect Kagome and Kaguya have. Are they afraid to be alone? Do they despise themselves so much? Don't they realise they deserve better? And finally, will Kikyo ever find out about Inuyasha's deceit? I hope he dumps him, even if the eventually end up together. Inuyasha need to put his feet on the ground. Maybe Izayoi will give him a reality check?


~krazy4fluffy~ (Chapter 10) - Sun 22 Nov 2009

I liked how you talked about the girls that are involved even though I missed Sesshoumaru a lot. However, I think it's kinda pointless in some way because we are not supposed to know what they are thinking about. Unless you are planning to write a future chapter where you concentrate on them once again...

I still think it's somewhat off... But I liked it... So please continue soon :)


~krazy4fluffy~ (Chapter 9) - Sun 22 Nov 2009

I wish Sesshoumaru had punched Inuyasha... But, oh, well *dramatic eye rolling* Sesshoumaru is a peaceful guy after all... :P nah kiddin lol

I love the whole dilemma thing. It's so... realistic in ways. But I also think that not ALL people would do that. It happened to me once - being caught in a relationship, knowing it's gonna end up badly - and I changed so much after that, that now I'm cold and distant :P ... So you might take that into consideration. After all, what kagome did to Sesshoumaru, in my opinion, is unforgiveable. If I were him, I would shut her out of my life and heart even if it costs me everything I have.


~krazy4fluffy~ (Chapter 8) - Sun 22 Nov 2009

I love that statement...

 

Payback is a bitch :D

 

Well deserved. I rejoiced in evil happiness as he showed the world, and specifically Kagome, how good his relationship is with Kaguya. (Well, kinda....lol)


miwa03 (Chapter 10) - Sun 22 Nov 2009

Everyone are in pain... So sad...

So selfish Inuyasha. And you called your feeling toward Kags love? So impossible.

Teak, your story is just too heart shattering.. I can't wait too see some sunshine here...


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