OMG! I can't believe you finally updated this story! But, I'm so glad you did. I was beginning to wonder if it would end up on my "incomplete forever" list. It's a wonderful story. There are a lot of grammatical errors and missing words here and there, but, at least it made sense, so I could ignore the errors. Can't wait for the next chapter, so I can see how this all ends. BTW, nice twist on the Naraku part of the storyline. I don't believe I've read any stories where Naraku was actually Satan himself. :D
amy (Chapter 7) - Sun 01 May 2011
Please finish this story!
Crises Core (Chapter 7) - Sat 13 Jun 2009
| I wuv this story so fluffy and warm yet tragic and angsty x3 I want more!!!! PLEASE UPDATE NOW =/
Saholia (Chapter 1) - Fri 28 Nov 2008
| Great beginning--though tragic. :)
Nyuka (Chapter 6) - Mon 24 Nov 2008
| Ok I know that your probably have your own ways to set up how the 'Dragon of Hell' Naraku and the 'Onigumo' Naraku became one....But I want to put in my theory....The Dragon So infuriated that it stalked the well for centuries...and when he felt the power of the Shikon jewel 'Midoriko's soul' and the power of the family he was wanting to kill....He finds Kikyo with the Jewel ....he knows he can use this jewel to get though the well because it is the soul of a family member (I'm sure he had plenty of time to think about it No?) ...he wait for the opertune time and Possesses Onigumo to take the Jewel but the bandet Onigumo is still present so he wanted to pin the two against eachother....or some thing like that...wow that was fun manimulating the story like that ...well can't wait to see what you write and to see if I was anywere close...XD.....Nyuka
YAY!! You finally updated!! I love this story..it's so different, and, I was very worried that you wouldn't finish it. Thanx, and I hope you update it very, very soon! :D
sunset in love (Chapter 1) - Mon 24 Nov 2008
| whoops, i almost leave your fic without a review, it really deserve a review... such good fiction should be reviewed you know, i like the plot, No, i love the plot, and i really wish for your next chapter
| I love this story! please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
Vou (Chapter 5) - Thu 09 Oct 2008
| OMG KEEP GOING! >D
| OOOOHHHH!! This delicious!! This so good it make my mouth water!! Please update soon.
grilka63 (Chapter 1) - Sat 04 Oct 2008
| Wow, I am truly enjoying this. It is always nice to read a new storyteller's efforts! Real depth and plot to this story, it sucks you right in! Please update soon!
stars (Chapter 5) - Sat 04 Oct 2008
| i love it please keep going
stars (Chapter 4) - Tue 16 Sep 2008
| Love the story please keep going
bell (Chapter 1) - Wed 21 May 2008
| very good story, i hope you continue it.
Tinker73 (Chapter 4) - Thu 15 May 2008
| Hey Liz new reader here tell me that it will continue the story is beautiful so far I can only hope there is Please
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