Okay, I've read this twice so far. It really suits your writing style and I'm really glad you decided to write for this challenge. This is excellent!

ahhh i absolutly love this!! great twist at the end!

please update soon ill be waiting ^-^

What a promising story this is turning out to be! Well done, Skye! I appreciate your excellent writing skills and the fact that you portrayed Kagome as a Chinese girl. Maybe I am drawn to that because I am Chinese as well but that's just random. Anyway, this story is a refreshing change from the usual ones with its theme and setting, and I can't wait to see where you go with this. Please update soon - you're doing such a great job!

I'm glad that Sesshoumaru knows the sacrifice Kagome has made to keep him alive.  I'm scared for her, though.  He won't be able to protect her from Kouga when he's gone.  Kagome will have nothing left.  I'm glad that Souta got away though.  He deserves to live a good life.  Of course, Kagome deserves the same but I don't see that happening.  Great update!

So this is a WW2 based fic?  It's really interesting.  I'm very intruiged to see where you go with this.  I hope you don't forget about little Souta or let something bad happen to him  He's a sweet child.  Like the quinticenntial younger brother.  Like Kouga's portayal... arrogant confidence in his handsomenes and all.  Perrfect fit for him.  Update soon please!

Fabolous Skye! I think this will be a very romantic, thrilling, and full of action piece of fic... Great job!!!

AWESOME    I can't wait for the next update.  This fic soundes very interesting and a very new concept.  So excited to see where you take this one.

i'm so excited to finally start reading this!!  *twinkle*

As always, you AMAZE me.  So much going on, and yet you still crank this out... inventive, imaginative, unique, and so well done!!  I can hardly wait for the next chapter (as usual, I'm SOOOOO greedy) to see where you take this from here!! :D ~~me~~

I feel so sorry for Kagome.  Society is strange, why should Kagome and her family lack honor because her father did?  Not fair, realistic, but not fair.  Please update again soon.  I hope that Sesshoumaru will be able to help Kagome against Kouga.  He's creepy.