I like the start so far! Please update soon this is really good.
Hi! I think your story is really funny so far! But the one thing that has been bothering me is the title: Wow what an booty... Isn't it supposed to be Wow what A booty?? Was it intentional? (please dont hate this review! ^^)
Well it's not a bad start, but you keep switching from 3rd to first person, and the grammar is a little off. The idea is good though.
What is wrong with Kagome? She has beautiful, naked Sesshoumaru in front of her. Instead of staring at him she falls unconscience? That was a waste! :) Hopefully next time she will be able to enjoy the show! More soon please!
Great start! Poor Kagome...but what a delicious predicament to be in (grin). Please give us the next chapter soon!
Really steamy! can't wait til the next chapter ^_~
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