This story was amazing and I enjoyed it.

How God Created Mother

God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

I found this story when i went to your profile after reading A Real Good Man(which is an amzaing story btw). I just want to say you are an amzingly talented writer. Please keep the stories coming. My day was spent reading your stories lol. 

I like your stories a great deal.  You show real potential as a writer.

However, your typos and/or spelling errors, doubled up words are a distraction - sometimes I cannot figure out what you intended to say.

In telling you that, I think this story - Forever Was a Lie - was the worst of them, you do seem to have gotten better, for I don't see as many issues in A Real Good Man.

You should considered finding a beta reader. I'm sure you can find someone on this site who is willing to preread for you. I am willing to do so myself, so just consider it.

I look forward to more of your stories,

Good luck!

Great story, I am a sucker for a happy ending.

beautiful

it's truely beautiful

Aw, this was a lovely story. I didn't check to see if you completed it but kudos! There are allot of spelling ang grammatical errors but a couple of proof reads should clear that up! Good luck on this story and any future stories you have!

I Really liked this! Good job. I'm a little on the vengeful side- I personally can't wait un til Naraku gets out of that prison. Just so I can imagine what then inuyasha, inupapa, and Sesshoumaru do to him. Heh heh heh . Oh, and let's not forget Kagome's father MAmoru, was it?

Sounds interesting so far, I hope she kicks his ass. Or blows him off when he attempts to fulfill the bet. Heh heh heh , he deserves to fall in love with his intended target.

I love your story. But I get the feeling Ive read something like this before, is this posted on another site? Anyway, I hope you update soon.

Nice beginning, I can't wait to see what you have in store for us. I look forward to the next chapter :)

Poor Kagome- it looks like there is a lot of heartbreak ahead for her.  On the upside, I LOVE stories where Sesshie breaks Kagome's heart.  Go For It!