LOL!! Oh, I am soooo loving this story so far. Love IT! You have just gotten yourself another avid fan. I am going to really enjoy reading how things work how for Sesshoumaru and Kagome. LOL..'Bad Dog'!! Oh, that was a good one. Please, pleaseee continue writing, I will be here constantly to check on updates. Onward..ohhh talented writer..write on.

I don't see how bringing in a raving loon to kill the people will make things better.

Oh well thiis is a wonderful story, keep up the good work. I do think its wrong for

the gods to hurt the people of his lands.

putting them together like this is one thing but helping the bad guys is another.

it makes them no better

I think it's sad that Sesshoumaru is so ashamed of Kagome, and the curse, that he wouldn't even go back to defend his home.  Will he go back to try and reclaim it?  I like your new update!  Can't wait to find out what you have planned next!

I don't think Sesshoumaru and Kagome will ever be able to get along.  They fight so much they're like 5 year olds.  I'm just glad that Hojo has been taken care of.  Hopefully Kagome won't have to worry about him again.  Thanks for the update! 

I think you have a very nice idea going on here. :) Though Sesshoumaru appears slightly OOC to me, but perhaps my interpretation of his character differs from yours.

One thing that I noted though... You told logic behind naming the kami of fate. "Zureinoshimei: One of my made up names. Zurei: trick. No: of. Shimei: fate. Literally “Trick of Fate”"  Now, I've only taken 2 courses of Japanese (attending the third :), but I think you're using 'no' particle incorrectly. It is too that 'no' marks possession much like 'of' in English, but the thing is that the word that comes before 'of' is the possession (e.g. Book of mine), whereas the word preceeding 'no' is the possessor (e.g. Watashi no hon). So, I think you have that name flipped. It reads Fate of trick instead of trick of fate and thus should actually be Shimeinozurei. ^^; I just wanted to point this out to you. :3 If it helps, I don't think many others have noticed it.

I really, really think that Sesshoumaru should kill Hojo.  He's crazy!  Either that, or make sure he spends the rest of his life in a padded cell.  Thank you for the incredible update!  Can't wait for more!

I certainly hope that Hojo doesn't get his hands on Kagome again.  He is creepy!  Hopefully Sesshoumaru beats him to a pulp this time, I don't think that he will understand anything else.  Thanks so much for the update!  Please post your next chapter soon!

That was a great chapter, now add more!!! Please please PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow! This is great so far! I LOVE IT!!!!!!! I also love your rants too. They're soooooooooo funny! Please continue on with the story!

this story is really funny hehe i like how sess kidnaps kagome to go see rin

this is an aresome story and i cant wait for the next chapter

Good idea.

But isnt Amaterasu the Sun Goddess??

And you're not QUITE catching their characters in the story. Work on ICness.

Such as, Inuyasha hasn't seen Inu no Taisho (notice the 'no' I put in there) since he was little, if at all, and he has no reaction to seeing him. Neither does Sesshomaru. And Inu-papa shows no reaction either, except for punching his son for bad language.

Second, you have Kagome, who is very self-unaware about her abilities, attack a goddess to get her attention. Kagome is NOT the kind of girl who would do that, even if it meant saving a life. She'd throw herself in the way.

Third, you have Amaterasu kinda contradicting herself. She wants to kill Sesshomaru, but she wants to save him. You need more depth in her character.

Again, great idea. The execution just needs a bit of work.

* laughs hesterically* this is the funniest fic i have ever read. KEEP IT UP!

I think I've been reading this story on ff.net, and I really like it.  However, why do both Kagome and Sesshoumaru want to kill you?  Shouldn't they be happy that you have them together in your story?  And, you give Sesshoumaru a second chance and don't kill him off, at least immediately, in your story.  I think they both owe you an apology!  Thanks for bringing your story to Dokuga.  I can't wait to read more.