Oh I remember reading this story back in the times when I wasn't a member! So glad that I stumbled upon it again, it is EPIC!
So, I'm new to Dokuga, only a few months have I been aware of this beautiful site, but an avid follower of FanFiction. Imagine my surprise and when I am reading a story when I am suddenly predicting the events!
Turns out, I've started your story before, when if was only a few chapters old. I am very very happy that I've been able to read it to the end, and wanted to let you know I enjoyed it immensely. : ) The one thing that I was confused about, was: If Kagome is alive in the second go-round with the chocolate cake and all, does Sesshomaru pick up on the severity of keeping her away from the radiation? Does he try as hard? Or does he know the trick this time?
Please continue your awesomeness,
Kaikie
Um... question: In chapter 2 you said Rin was eight but in chapter nineteen she's thirteen.... How much time has passed between chapter 2 and chapter 19?
Uh...your recap was a little off. Wasn't it suppose to be "Sesshomaru glowed white". not Mamemitsu, and.."Zureinoshimei's voice resounded....", not Amaterasu?
Anyhoo! I really loved the way you ended this chapter...with a repeat! :D And, Sesshomaru running away!? That was priceless! Can't wait to see what happens in the next chappy. And, how is Kagome suppose to get back??
| i totally understan kagome's fear of the bugs!
its the legs and how the move, soooooooooooooooo freaky! tho the lil carpet beatles r ok. n pillbug r the worst! (shudders)
Hesunohana (Chapter 23) - Mon 26 Apr 2010
a good fiction. you used well the idea of the link. I also love the passage with the two Sesshoumaru.
Mrs. Sesshomaru Taisho (Chapter 1) - Fri 15 Jan 2010
GREAT! LOVE IT! I GOT A REQUEST 4 U. COULD YOU WRITE A STORY BASED ON THIS? SESSHOMARU IS A RUTHELESS DEMON IN THE MOUNTAINS NEAR KAGOMES' VILLAGE(PRETEND SHE'S FROM FEUDAL JAPAN) AND HE IS KILLING ANYONE WHO COMES NEAR HIM BECAUSE HE HAS NO MATE. WHEN KAGOME WAS BORN A DEMONESS ORACLE(THINK PERCY JACKSON& THE OLYMPIANS) PROCLAIMED SHE WOULD BE SESSHOMARUS' MATE. SHE ACCEPTS IT BLAH, BLAH, BLAH, BUT SOME VILLAGER MEN DON'T. AS SHE IS TRAVELING UP TO SESSHOMARUS' CAVE THE MEN TRY TO KILL HER OR SOMETHING TO 'SAVE' HER FROM SESSHOMARU. BUT SESSHOMARU GETS THERE IN TIME. I LEAVE THE REST TO YOU. PREFERABLY FROM SESSHOMARU'S & KAGOME'S P.O.V.
NAO-chan33 (Chapter 23) - Thu 10 Dec 2009
Aww... I liked the ending... lol Enjoyed reading this story! :D
--nao-chan
autumngold (Chapter 23) - Wed 25 Nov 2009
I am so happy that you gave your wonderful story such a nice ending. Thank you for having Sesshoumaru and Kagome be so content with each other and their lives together! Hope you decide to write another Kagome/Sesshoumaru story soon!
Brilliant ending dearest...The circle of life.
Brought so many emotions to me, all I can do now is smile - thank you
Love the ending. Too Beautiful ;)
this made me all warm and fuzzy. Thank you so much.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I so enjoyed this story! I love each and every chapter even the ones where Sess was such an ass.
It is so going on my favs!!!!
Hugs,
LadySafire
Oh gosh, I might not be able to handle this story being over! I honestly cried at the end. But I do tend to cry at the end of really good fanfics. Loved the journey! I just can't wait until your next fanfic!
Kanna37 (Chapter 23) - Tue 24 Nov 2009
Oh man. A goddess on the make... do you know how much trouble you could cause with her? She'd be an awesome one to hang with, you know that, right? Great story, very entertaining, and nice characters.
Amber
Cheers loudly from the stands...now that's how a male grovels
Abso-freaking brilliant my dear - my heart hit rock bottom, my pulse raced away but the dog fessed him and won his female in the end.
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!
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