if you could just...I dont know, make an explosion and then when all the smoke settles BAM! the rest of the story would be up...that would be awesome =] yeah?
GREAT job, seriously, you have be grinning like an idiot! super in love with this chapter, just so you know =]
So glad you have decided to join Dokuga! This story is just starting to heat up and I can't wait to see how the charade goes, especially since Inutaisho was with Inuyasha when he asked Kagome out! Will they get caught before they even get started?
I look forward to an update!
AHH!! I am so excited!!
Please do hurry with the next chapter because you got me hooked!!
I love your plot is really nice and unique, something i was planning to write but in different situations of course.
P.S; i voted for you!! Hope that you win!!
Nysrina (Chapter 3) - Wed 27 Jan 2010
An interesting story thus far :D Your summary promises mayhem and I guess things are going to get complicated from this point on, what with Inuyasha interested in Kagome and Sesshoumaru having strong instinctual reactions to Kagome's presence. Heh.
Do hurry up and bring it on! Hee...
Ruriame (Chapter 1) - Tue 05 Jan 2010
I like how you used the character's personalities to their strengths in what they're like in this story. And of course there had to be some drama between Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru over Kagome ;)
Kristin (Chapter 3) - Wed 11 Nov 2009
OMG! i love this so far! It was so cute how Kagome and InuYasha acted in the first chapter and so sad when she had to call off their date. Sesshomaru's character is awsome, he already likes her some. :) I cannot wait until the next chapter. I wonder how InuYasha is going to react! It's so sad!
Great writing skill, by the way. :3
You rock my sox,
Kristin.
OH WOW!!!!!!!!!! I want to read the next chapter now! Please update soon! PLEASE!?
this is a very great story that i like and love a lot since i first started reading it your a very great author who wrote this really great and wonderful story.
MORE! lol I'm totally addicted to this fic. ;) I’m looking forward to seeing what happens next.
I don't usually write reviews, I feel like I sound like such a dork when I do but...I just had to let you know how much I enjoyed this fic of yours. It captivated me from the first chapter and I simply MUST have more of this delightfully intriguing work of yours.I like how you decided to have it take place somewhere you are familiar with, it will make your descriptions that much more personal and accurate. Your writing provides just enough detail to give a mental picture without going on and on, making the reader mentally groan and sat' Okay, okay..I get it' and, I like that. I tend to favor the fics that can create the mental images in my mind as they happen in the story..kind of like watching a movie in my head. Bravo ! I am on the edge of my seat wondering and waiting to see what will happen when he takes her to the function and Yasha sees them together after she blew him off...Oh the fun is soo about to start, isn't it? Anyhoo, welcome to Dokuga and please update this soon.
i just love this story! well i can't wait till you update!
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Fairqueen (Chapter 3) - Mon 05 Oct 2009
this is such a sweet story. i love it. :)
I really enjoyed this story. Honestly, I read that you had posted it on fanfiction so I went there to see if you had more chapters. I feel like an utter nerd. I hope you update this captivating tale soon. I want to see how Inuyasha will react to their "engagement" and how their relationship will blossom. Keep up the great work!
Bravo! More, more more!
I thought you had to be a bartender, or something like that. The bar scene was so realistic, just like the breakfast scene from Kagome's day job. This story is so awesome.
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