A great and heartwrenching beginning. Wonderful work on capturing Kagome's feelings. I'm thinking Shippou didn't make it either... :(
Heh heh heh, Sesshy's little buddy's interest has been piqued by something? Or am I totally off-base here?
I liked this chapter if it wasn't a bit annoying to have it be left off where it was *glares* I know you did that on purpose *blows rasberry*
I'm curious as to the effect of the springhealer on Kags, so I'm probably going to be waiting quite impatiently on the next release. Nice chapter, and, with al due respect, hurry the hell up and write me another one :p .......sorry you had to see-hear that. SAT studying....it's getting to me ...
reema (Chapter 6) - Sun 04 Oct 2009
i love ur story .. tho im still waitin' 4 the juicy details hehe :P .. take ur time since u have children .. BUT PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON .. btw i like the idea of ur story ..
katlady (Chapter 6) - Sat 03 Oct 2009
i find the other stories do have the whole marking thing if you want a good excuse as to why InuYasha did nto mark Kagome go with his human heat or blood he is a half demon so it would work. Other wise I am enjoying what you have update soon.
Nothing was said about Inuyasha marking her. Why didn't he since he supposedly loved her and wanted her to stay with him? Also, you said nothing about Shippo. He was important to her, like an adopted son, so did he die or what? Also, has the disease run it's course and disappeared so that when she finally learns to love Sesshoumaru and gets pregnant with his pup, it will survive? It could be any of his pups would survive because of them being strong like their father. It seems I'm full of questions.
getbackban (Chapter 5) - Sat 03 Oct 2009
hi!i am really fascinated by ur story!keep up the good work!:d there's only 1 thing that is bugging me. in the last line of chapter 5 u wrote "two human girls, a two-headed dragon, an imp and a demon lord" but arent ah-un n jaken dead?
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