Absolutely love the story.

I love this story!! It is so different then anything I have ever read before on here. I can't wait to see what happens and more of the story pprogressing. Keep up the great work!!

Um, what exactly do you mean by: No matter how long he has lived and frolocked with women, he could never give himself to them.

That manages to imply that he sleeps around and at the same time it implies that he doesn't.

But hey good job! You almost spelled Ramen right this time! While the story is good it's riddled with so many typos and spelling errors and word confusion that it detracts from the story making it hard to read. You keep saying seized instead of ceased for instance and I have to go back and reread the sentence once I realize that it wasn't what you meant.

A beta would seriously help....and if you already have one I recomened a new one. http://dictionary.reference.com/ is also a great source to quickly and easily make sure you have the right words and spelling.

Great story! very original! I love it! Though if you'll lend me an ear, I think it would be better if Kagome would become full youkai later..perhaps another power surge during training...something...princess or no, she needs something to set her apart from all other hanyou. Or perhaps her miko powers will still play a part? Is that your plan? Again, great story! i do hope you intend to update soon!

Danke,

Sabine

Hey!!!  I just had to add another review.  I'm surprised there haven't been more reviews since this story is so fantastic.  I bet as the story progresses, more will come.  So don't be discouraged if you like lots of reviews.  At least you have me and Dani!  hahaha.  Keep coming with the  good chapters.

I, for one, am glad with the change in Sesshoumaru.  It's only natural that he loosen up some the longer he's around her and they get to know each other.  He can't always stay unapproachable and speak little.  In the anime, I saw him as a very emotional youkai.  He just showed it in different ways than Inuyasha.  I'll also be glad when Kagome finally gets her head on straight and releases her heart of her stupid infatuation for Inuyasha.  I never saw it as true love that came from her but from being Kikyo's reincarnation.  It's Kikyo's love that she's feeling.  It's about time she realizes this.  Since Shippo is a youkai, I hope that means that he will be able to stay with Kagome when the others have to depart.  He'll be devastated if he has to give up his new momma.

AWESOME! What more can I say?