I have have nearly all of your stories, and I have loved every single one of them! I think you are a wonderful writer. Your stories all have very good flow, which is not often found in fanfiction. I hate to seem like I'm nitpicking, but you do make several spelling errors and you tend to leave off a lot of your periods and commas. Your grammer is exceptional however, and your mistakes don’t detract from the stories at all. The spelling errors you seem to make most often are placing ‘s’ where there should be a ‘c’ or a ‘z’, an ’s’ where there should be a ’c’, and you tend to double up your ‘l’s and ‘t’s. Your characterization of Sesshoumaru especially seems very consistant with his true personality, even in the stories set in AU.
P.S. I chose to review on this story because Fenced is my favorite of all your works.
Lexie (Chapter 5) - Mon 18 Jan 2010
LOL!!!LOL!!!LOL!!! i laughed sooo hard i fell off the chair n then down the stairs!! a few bruises but the laugh was worth it! ;)
autumngold (Chapter 4) - Sun 11 Oct 2009
I wonder how badly Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha are going to damage the house this time? It sounds like Kagome has her job cut out for her. Not only does she need to watch Rin, Shippo, and Souta but it sounds like she is going to need to babysit Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru too. Hopefully she won't go crazy after a week. Thanks for the update!
Lily (Chapter 1) - Tue 29 Sep 2009
hmm... i like this so far but i want to know what Izayoi has to do with what's happening with Kagome and Sesshomaru also do we get an actual appearance from Naraku or is he gonna be mentioned by name only?
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