I loved it!!! I was almost expecting something something to happen with the jeweler and Kagome to basically punish him and have a whole bunch of little demon children running around adorned in his expensive jewelry or some shopkeeper. I expect still that something is going to happen involving raising Sesshoumaru's image in the children's eyes since they were mentioned but this was downright hilarious.
I love this story so much. I like how their thoughts are being layed out.
i like the public sceens. I hope there is more to come of them in public.
I do think kagome is being to prideful. because
not taking what someone is tyrin to give you is just as bad as not asking for help
when you need it. I hope you will write her getting over that issue. If she is going live
in that (time) she needs to dress just a little different. Maybe come
up with a style all her own so that she look good and be able move around and not
look indecent.
Saeko (Chapter 28) - Tue 25 Aug 2015
My heart... oh, my heart! Almost stuttering over the wonderful things in this chapter!
As much as I love the smut - I do, I REALLY do! - it was nice to see them in a setting with other people and no sex for a change, and I love the way you had Kags handle the idiot weapons salesman. I look forward to seeing the brothers interact in public more. Not many fics show the two of them teasing each other in this way, and being protective of each other like Sess just was of Inu. This is a much different side of their nature - especially Sess and a sense of humor! - that I don't see often enough.
I can't wait for more!
(Of course, take time for your health first, because that's obviously more important than my unhealthy fanfiction addiction. I actually CAN wait, I just don't want to. ^_^ But I'd rather have you healthy than me reading something sooner.)
Saeko
Ooo..hit'm where it hurts, right in the wallet. Loved this chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next!
So happy to see this updated!!! Great chapter!!
Aeris (Chapter 26) - Thu 09 Jul 2015
I have no problems admitting that I cackled when I saw the chapter announcement. I love this chapter and everyone before it. And I definitely look forward to everyone I after it. :) definitely one of my favorite stories, ever!
Such a sweet ending to an orgasmicly raunchy chapter. Love it!
laura (Chapter 24) - Tue 05 May 2015
Awesome. Cant wait for more!
Omaigawd now the true show starts. Can wait to see sess pounding away
Fun!
Ohohoho... I can't wait for the game to start!
... naughty, naughty Kagome! *grins*
I'm so happy to see this updated, and can't be any happier! I am glad that the brothers have finally come to understanding--and I can't wait for the next chapter where they all will play *chuckles*
-dee
Yeah update! Love how you are building the relationship. Can't wait for more!
I had a good laugh with this chapter, poor Kagome her two lovely men are very complicated and most certainly over think to much!
Always love your work please update soon!
Lucille (Chapter 20) - Wed 10 Dec 2014
Please continue this! :D
TKE (Chapter 20) - Wed 02 Apr 2014
lmfao....teach him the motorboat!!!!! thats too funny!
Konnichiwa, Sunset,
I've been addicted to MAI since day one. I love how you've worked the progression in this story.
And how both brothers finally learn to share via the Jewel that is Kagome. :)
Kitana-Tsukino-hime
Eliona (Chapter 20) - Wed 02 Apr 2014
Great chapter, keep it coming :3
LOL! Shouldn't they realize that since its her body, Kagome should be the one to decide?
silly males.....
Eliona (Chapter 19) - Wed 12 Mar 2014
Yes! He finally said it xD Now I'm very excited to see where this moment is going to lead <3
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