I think Sesshoumaru is gonna have some 'splaining to do!! lol, can't wait to read that, it should prove to be quite entertaining :)
autumngold (Chapter 3) - Tue 22 Sep 2009
Where is Kagome? I hope that Sesshoumaru has her hidden somewhere safe. It sounds like everyone is going to want to kill her, including her own family. Thanks for the update! I can't wait until Sesshoumaru talks to his dad! I hope he is able to get his mother on his side.
Ava 365 (Chapter 2) - Tue 22 Sep 2009
Geeze! You do have away with words. That was just so sweet! So, how are Sesshomaru's parents going to take it? Will it be easy for them from now on? Can't wait to read more!!
Saholia (Chapter 2) - Mon 21 Sep 2009
I've fallen in love with your use of words! This story is so original I can't stop reading it--I need more! lol, great fic, will you be continuing it?
Very sweet and romantic! Great job. :)
Awsome!!!!! Need More!!! So Romantic!!!
knifethrower,
Wow! What a remarkable story! Just from these first two chapters I can tell I'm going to be following this story avidly. I have to say I like the set up you have here. I like the little hints of future trouble. Hinting that dear old Inutaisho might have some less than noble intentions for Kagome...ohh...that's good. I also like how you've set up Sesshoumaru to be Kagome's knight in shining armor...or furry armor, however you want to look at it. I know some people might consider the plot cliche, but it is so rare to find a story written well. Like this one. So I find it refreshing. Love the remarks about Kikyo! Fake tits and lips! Some people don't know this about me but I HATE Kikyo. Can't stand her! So love that. I also like how you have Inuyasha protective over Kagome, yet so clearly not interested in her. Or will he want her once he learns that Sesshoumaru has her? Some people will always want what they can't have. I'm interested to see where you take this. Who will object the most? Kagome's mother? Sesshoumaru's family? Sesshoumaru's mother? What kind of backlash will there be? There are just so many possibilities and be assured I will be eagerly awaiting your next update. Very nice story. Well written. Intriguing. Maybe not the most original plot, but considering the depth of the writing, the rounded characters and the quality of your writing that is hardly a draw back. At root most plots have been taken on at one time or another. Anyways, getting long winded and probably boring you so I'll wrap this up. In short GREAT STORY!
Sincerely,
Texanlady
autumngold (Chapter 2) - Mon 21 Sep 2009
I just wonder if everyone is going to be mad at them? Sesshoumaru's parents think she is going to get together with Inuyasha. Kagome's family dresses her like an old spinster. I can't wait to find out everyone's reaction to Kagome and Sesshoumaru mating?! Please post more soon!
Ava 365 (Chapter 1) - Mon 21 Sep 2009
Mhmmm! Beautiful. I loved it, it was so sweet. Is it a full story, is there going to be more? If it was only a one shot I still loved it but if it is going to be a full story I'll love it even more. Great job anyways!
This was so beautiful and sweet. The ambiance was perfect, great job!
malom (Chapter 1) - Mon 21 Sep 2009
OMG! I am jumping up and down with glee! An AU offering from KT! *Puts hands on face and squeals!* I love the opening, is a good portent of things to come.
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