Wow.... That was... intense. That's all I can say about this chapter, other than that it was incredibly amazing.
Krash (Chapter 7) - Tue 01 Dec 2009
This is good, please update soon.
Anonymous (Chapter 7) - Tue 01 Dec 2009
oh no :( i hope shes doing it so the killers won't target her anymore.. i really want them to be together.
Patricia (Chapter 7) - Tue 01 Dec 2009
I like how she had some back bone and made it intersting! love the drama hope he can work to get her back.
Oh, no! You surprised me! What a tough cookie this Kagome is!
sunset in love (Chapter 5) - Sat 10 Oct 2009
update... update.... please update... urghhhh you are so evil to leave it at that, and now i'm on my knees begging you for another update! or updatessss... please...
Poor Kagome, her heart is broken, while Sesshy tries to put together a strategy. I don't know why I love to see her suffer so, but I do. I love a broken-hearted Kagome, I identify with her so strongly. When her heart is "un-broken", it is such a great moment. Part of me hopes it comes soon, so she can be happy, part wants her to suffer more. It is always fun to find out how long her suffering will last... I'm really enjoying this. I hope you can update soon...
Hi,
I like this story. it is well done...i feel bad for Kagome and I hope all will work out for Kagome and Sesshomaru. it sucks they have to go through all of this but it sometimes happens that way...
good job and update soon...
Awesome! I look forward to seeing how things play out. Please update soon!
Patricia (Chapter 3) - Wed 23 Sep 2009
| what a cliffy! Can't wait for the next update. This storie shows promise.
theflamer (Chapter 3) - Wed 23 Sep 2009
| theres not enough information and its completly confusing.
| I have to see what happened. That was so mean, left me interested, but still!! I can't wait to see what you have next. :3
Fairqueen (Chapter 3) - Tue 22 Sep 2009
| first this is a great story and please keep writing. But what i want to know is are all the authors having meeting and agreeing to leave evil cliff hangers. please it's so unfair (yes i know life is unfair) but it u don't update soon i may have to go back to my way of reading only finished stories because i get sad about not seeing the end of a good story.
autumngold (Chapter 3) - Tue 22 Sep 2009
| Thank you for the update! I still really don't forgive Sesshoumaru, I think he should have been honest with Kagome from the beginning. If he had explained to her what was going on, at least she wouldn't have been blindsided by his leaving her. What a jerk, he thought he would be extra mean to her so she wouldn't contact him again? Nice guy. Can't wait to see if what Inuyasha tells his friends will make me forgive Sesshoumaru.
| interesting story so far. keep updating.
Radakid (Chapter 2) - Sat 19 Sep 2009
| I like this story a lot, but I'm having some problems with the spacings... When another character speaks it's usually done in a new paragraph.
Also don't be afraid of white space. It's fine to start new paragraphs and space them apart from others, you don't need only one paragraph for one sequence of actions in your story. It's less confusing when its spaced out properly.
I hope you take this into consideration as you move along in your story, and I look forward to reading more of it.
-R
autumngold (Chapter 2) - Sat 19 Sep 2009
| I find I don't care what made Sesshoumaru change his mind. He knew his families ideas even before he got together with Kagome. Why couldn't he have been honest with her? Sure, she wouldn't have slept with him, but she still would have been his friend. I'm sure Sesshoumaru's aunt has arranged a marriage for him, but he could have grown some balls and told her no if Kagome meant anything to him. He didn't have to be so cruel! If he had been honest Kagome wouldn't have chased after him. At least I hope she wouldn't have. Great update!
| Oooh, I loved it. Thanks for updating so soon, I hope you can do it again!
| Oooh, I like this beginning. I'd like to see Yasha, Miroku and Shippo try to get at Sesshoumaru for hurting Kagome. What was he thinking?
| Poor Kagome! But I love it when Sesshomaru is an a**. I can't wait for the next chapter...
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