Holy shit you made Kagome practically useless in your story. Stop doing her like that, just make your own OC instead. it's so OOC, all she does is listen and obey like a dog, which is so unlike her personality at all. God this is so frustrating. Not to mention you made her excluded from the fight against Naraku. And sesshomaru, god forbid, treats kagome like a doormat and instead of apologizing, he just fucks her. Not everything is solved ny sex. I hate him in this story, i kept reading till the end but there was no development at all. And that ugly bitch koga grates on my nerves. He slapped a woman and after getting rejected, he went crawling to said woman he slapped. He basically settled for ayame. 

You would think if inuyasha didn't want to see them banging he'd stop barging in on them all the time. But the digs he throws at Sesshomaru are priceless! LOL!

May i just say, as gross as it is, I'm glad poor Jakken finally got some. The poor little guy is just so stressed all the time, always getting kicked around and stepped on despite his unwavering loyalty and hardwork. He deserves a little action, even if only from a pig. LOL!

Love the story but, Kagome is just cool with him ordering her around? She's not at all perturbed by the fact that he said he'd just toss her aside and take her child? She's seriously has not one word to say about any of this?? Are we sure this is Kagome Higurashi?

i waited until this story was done to read it and i'm glad i did. this was a GREAT story. it was short, sweet,and full of lemon-y goodness. i was surprised at the plot though. sango and inuyasha ended up together. kanna was adopted. miroku didn't marry sango and naraku was killed in a different way. that was a cool way to do a story. it was original and i liked it very much. keep up the great writing. c'ya'

Ok seriously? This weird obey obey obey thing was a little over kill. Like Kagome has no opinions. I get he is 20th century but this feels like its a submissive writing or a guy. And I mean hey to each its own I like to be submissive at times but it feel like Sessh is rubbing it in the readers faces

Nice Story!

this was a very good story. i liked it a lot. keep writing good material and i will read it. c'ya'

I really enjoyed this story. Thank you 

HOLY GUACAMOLE!!! This is AMAZING and HILARIOUS!!!!

okay, I'm conflicted. I completely disliked Sesshoumaru's attitude in chapter 6 but now...I find that can understand his actions. Yet, the feminist in me is shouting at my understanding attiutde.

Inuyasha why are you being such a poop. smh

BTW, i love your writing. I just love how it flows. ^-^

Sesshoumaru...smh!

Dominance is one thing. Arrogance, on the other hand, is completely different.

Kagome, say something!!! Put that male in his place!

I love Sesshoumaru, but come on!

great story, perhaps you can make another story about sessh/kagome :D

I was looking for this fic because I remember reading it a couple years back and I must say that I LOVE IT and am GLAD that I have found it once again and this time with more chapters :)

I loved your story.  I thought the way you paired Inuyasha and Sango up was unique.  Your style of writing is passionate, sweet, funny and great. It has been my plesure to read this wonderful story.

Awesome story!

I truly hate the sango and inuyasha coupling but overall it was a good story i guess :P

This story was very good. The writing was good and discriptive, there was fighting as well as romance and the pairings were believable. However, Kikyo's part, especially her sudden change in attitude at the end was a little fake and then I didn't like how it seemed that Sesshomaru's attitude towards Kagome never really got straightened out. He always seemed to think of her as a possession and whenever she got mad and tried to withhold sex and affection from him he mainly seemed upset by the fact that she wasn't treating him 'as a good mate should.' We didn't really get to see the affection he held for Kagome, mainly we saw possessiveness. I will say that I have read other stories of yours and Sesshomaru was perfect in those stories but I just felt that in this one he was lacking. None the less, this story was still very entertaining and I enjoyed reading it.

PS- sorry about any typos

WOW  EXCELLENT STORY!!!!

OMG, the thing about cleaning off the ass print on the window seriously made me laugh out loud. Great job!