I absolutely love your character, Balthazar. Thank you for writing a lovely story.
I am fully aware that this story is over and done with, however i can not help but wonder what it would be like had the last few chapters gone differently and Conner or Balthazar got the girl.
*sighs*
Personally, i was rooting for Balthazar. I don't know what it was about him, but I have a feeling that he isn't one to be easily swayed and the fact that he cared for Kagome so deeply is so heart wrenching. Sequel? That would be really worth the read! Then again, all your works are. You're an amazing writer!
Wow. Sitting down and reading that in one sitting was really emotional. Great job! I couldn't stop until I finished it...
I... wow just wow... this was an awesome story, sucked me right in to the point where I read it straight through. You did a great job, I fell in love with your OC's, was angry at the inu tachi for what they did, and greatful to Kikyou for remembering the even though she was dead, she still had a heart. Wonderful job!
Danielle (Chapter 18) - Sat 20 Feb 2010
This is a wonderfully written story! I just finished reading it a second time, and I feel it was better than the first time I read it. I love the original characters from Scotland and thought their development was great - none of them were to complex, or made to powerful, and they all had weaknesses and secrets that made them more real. The story's progression was very well planned out; I didn't feel at any time that the plot was rushed or skipped anything. I especially loved the love triangle aspect (or would it be a love square?) It added a different kind of emotional tension and angst than was already present. I did notice something on my second read through though - when Inuyasha and the gang brought Kagome to Sesshomaru it indicated he picked her up with one arm, yet in chapter 17 it sad he held her in his 'arms'. This is probably just a typo, but made me want to look again to see if any other chapters had it switch between Sesshomaru have one arm or two. Overall, this was a great story and I look forward to reading more wonderfully created works.
yEy! that was excellent!
T_T thats abotu the sadest thing ever
this is anamzing growth chapter i must say that i really like this, though i'm starting not to like the scottish inu's >_> LORDS SESSHO! i'm so loyal unless there's an itachi near by, its Sessho all the way!
i'm sad for payton :l and jaken being sweet? omg *dies* *revies self to keep reading*
She took with her only the box and her mirror. By the time she got done with Naraku, he would rue the day he laid his hands upon her beloved sister. He would find that Kagura's big sister was going to teach him the hardest lesson of all: Payback was a bitch. <-- yanno i tihnk i love you now b/c no one really give Kanna the chance to do anything! really she needs to have some say in what goes on with her life and i like that your making her vicious >:3
The palace residents froze as a loud and vicious snarl ripped through the palace. Ashitaka's eyes widened and he gasped, "Dear Kami. Get to your chambers and lock your doors!" <- that is greatness =x
Kagome paled and shook her head. 'Out of the frying pan and into the fire, Kagome.' She thought.
She turned and walked into her chambers. She needed a nap.
Naps solve ALL problems lmao!!! hahahahahahaha
"Lord Ashitaka, I appreciate your hospitality, but I really don't care to hear what you people desire. Let me tell you what I demand. I want your full cooperation in hunting Naraku down. I want you to back the hell off of the western lands, seeing as that is now my home. Finally, I want you to make it very clear to every damn noble here that I won't be anyone's victim anymore. Cross me and I will strike back. Work with me and I will be your best friend. This is not up for negotiation. Now, what is your answer?" Kagome said, her eyes trained upon the hosting lord.
AWESOME!!!! *chuckles*
:l i dont like conner he's getting in the way of lord fluffybutt i dont like him at all.
yanno i know this story must have pissed off your spell cheker on your word program hahaha its sad but i love it. i cant wait to get to kagome's anger.
wickedone43 (Chapter 18) - Fri 08 Jan 2010
This was AWESOME!! I loved the Scottish twist in it!! Very creative. The story line was great and it flowed smoothly. My congrats on this fic. I will be looking for more of your fics here and at FFN.net and AFFN.net. I think I have seen some of your work there too. Again my congratulations and thanks for keeping us all entertained with your works.
Best Story EVER!!!!! would love to read more stories envolving the Scottish Inus !!!
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