Beautiful first chapter. Too bad it's wasted as a one-shot. It would make a fantastic beginning to a beautiful story. Even if the story is short. I want to know if he actually gets Kagome in the end since the ending is left hanging.
Awwww....*sniff sniff* this one is so sweet...I am so happy for Sesshoumaru,
Lovely one shot, well written and sentimental but in a believable way.
| This was short and sweet. And got straight to the point. Need I say more?
Good job. :P
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