Great story, Maya Angelou passed away, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
God took the fragrance of a flower, The majesty of a tree, The gentleness of a morning a dew The calm of a quiet sea, The beauty of a twilight hour The soul of a starry night The laughter of the rippling brook, The grace of a bird in flight, Then God fashioned from these things A creation like no other, And when His masterpiece was through, He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
Hm, I really like this story. Shizuka seems to be a real cool OC, and I can just picture her in my head. ;)
I'm looking forward for updates!
Hesunohana (Chapter 14) - Sat 03 Apr 2010
a bit sad...always. we feel how our beloved couple, even in love, is still unhappy. well, that's how I feel it.
Neva (Chapter 14) - Wed 31 Mar 2010
very cute story, i love shizuka <3 cant wait for the next chapters
Ruriame (Chapter 3) - Sun 07 Feb 2010
I really liked this line because it just struck me as something deep: "No, Sesshoumaru," she said, getting to her feet. "I don't think it's ridiculous at all."
When I have time again, I'll definitely read more of this story. It seems like it'll be a good read :)
PS... DO NOT change any part of your plot line. Let it flow into what it wants to be or whatever you originally planned for it.
What an emotional roller coaster ride!!! I loved it, and I can't wait to read more!!!
Awesome story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
I DON'T WANT KAGOMI TO DIE! Please, make Sesshomaru change time...
sakurachan_1 (Chapter 9) - Wed 11 Nov 2009
This is such a good fic.
It's been awhile since i have read one but this one is very good.
I have enjoyed it very much and would hope that you would
continue with the good work.
This last chapter was so nicely done that I would have thought it to
be a very good ending for this story.
sakurachan_1
It's funny. I'd been avoiding this story because I had a funny feeling about Kagome, and of late, reading anything sad has left me feeling super drained, but today I decided I didn't care. The story sounded like it had potential, and I'm really glad I sat down to read it. Your prose is delicate, touching without being sappy, well paced and over all enjoyable. There's also hope in the chapters depicted in the future. I'm looking forward to reading your updates!
this is so touching...
Loryn K. (Chapter 8) - Tue 27 Oct 2009
I absolutely love this story. Everything is well written, put in perfect order, and I love the relationship blossoming between Kagome and Sesshomaru. It's great that Kagome had love with Inuyasha too. I love the whole Sess/Kag pariing but to honestly go with the plot, Inuyasha and Kagome were meant to be together. -sigh- This story is just realistic. I can't wait to see how it's going to turn out! Good luck with future chapters and I'll definately keep checking up on it!
stars (Chapter 8) - Tue 27 Oct 2009
please updata
Wow, that was some chapter! A lot of action!
More, more, more, please! I love this story...
But... but... don't they have any children? What? Mister oh mighty doesn't want to conceive a hanyou? lol can't wait to read more... i think you have great writing skills, so keep up the good work.
Wow, that was beautiful.
So, I'm sitting here, crying, after that last chapter. It's really sad, what Sesshoumaru said. To have seen Kagome die, wait for her, see her for a moment and only to have to say goodbye to her again....That is so terribly heart-wrenching.
*sniffs* Oh that was so bittersweet but I loved reading it all the same. Bravo! Can't wait to read more. :)
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