Oh ye, who have faith in me...my life is finally getting under control...and I shall return with updates!! BWAHAHA!

I really like the line this story is following. I think that it would add some more body if you made Kagome oblivious to Sesshoumaru's attention and she and Inuyasha make-up, then start her realization of "shit, i love the ice prick!" etc etc etc.

absolutely amazing story so far. im really enjoying where you're going with this, and you've made every instance very dramatic and real. as for the language part... if you're considering the typical "once upon a time" stories, they were largely from hans christian anderson and the grims brothers, which are german/slavic in origin. you could have her being fluent in german. however, the flip side of the coin is that those stories are translated into hundreds of languages, so that part's really up to you to decide. can't wait for the next installment!

i like it already, and i've only read chapter 1!

I absolutely LOVE it!! Can't wait for more!! ~InuAtashi

Hiyaaaa. Awsome. I read your storie some time ago and then i lost it, im so glad to have found it again. For this being a rough hack you are good with your first grammar and such. I love the detail and immagry you are adding and the pavce is perfict (though you should update faster). ;P Update soon and I will love you forever and ever.

Yay!! Very good... next bit of chapter lol. To be honest, I think I'd like the idea of Kags with a flute. It's soft but sharp, just like her, and easy to carry. ^_^ I think the English language is the most taught in Japan, but she might know Spanish,French or Chinese. (If you want her to speak French, don't hesitate to ask me, it's my first language after all lol, I'll be honoured to help you) Other sites like FFnet or Mediaminer are huge, but still I think such an awesome fic would be really appreciated over there. It's not like most of the stories there show this quality in the plot and the writing. Good job!! Please update soon!! Dewa mata

Totally love this story already. Everything is believable to me and I really liked the scene where Kagome took her independence from Inuyasha. Personally I don't mind your rough cuts. I don't see any glaringly obvious grammatical mistakes. The flow of the story works well that I'd probably just automatically correct in my mind and move on anyway. Now if you needed to beta for plot discrepancies than I don't mind waiting longer for your work. It's worth the wait. ^_^

I really like this story, the writing, and the ideas its always exciting to see when you have updated. as far as what language to use I think you should use french because it's very soft and flowy with gentle consonants and if you wanted I could be the translator for you because I am fluent. Thanks in advance for the great story love it!!!!!

Definately awesome story. I like the detail you're putting into it. It would be cool if Kagome could teach Rin something unique, like astronomy or something like that. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon:)

I like what you've done with this concept. You've put a fresh spin on something that has been chewed up and re-chewed over and over again. The new flavor you're bringing to the "Kagome tutors Rin" plotline is refreshing. I've noticed the Sesskag community has gotten stagnant with the same stuff over and over again, and I was very happy when I found this story. :D As far as an instrument, I could see a flute or violin... you know, something that hasn't been done before. I've seen guitars and even battery operated cd players. Ugh :P My personal preference with Sess is to turn him into a complete freakzilla... but that's just me lol. I can't wait to see what you have in store for future chapters!

I like this story so far. You have a way with expressing emotions that is very nice. Now.. I've seen this work before... If I beg and plead and give you puppy eyes will you update soon? Please?

Yay!! -does a little happy dance- Ahem. Anyway. Very good... bit of chapter? I'm glad you might be able to update on a more regular basis from now on, I love your story. ^_^ Just so to say... I'm a little sight impaired and the indentation you use for the split between paragraphs doesn't allow me to grow the characters... Could you please use another means of separation, like... I don't know... a short line of "o" (half a dozen might do the trick) or something else? Thank you very much in advance. XD Dewa mata

Yoo hoo! An update! D: Now give me more.... *Naraku-esque smile*

oh wow, simply wonderful. I can't wait to read more. Very well done. Bravo!

omg, inuyasha's such a baka! cant he keep his loud mouth shut or say something right for once? argh...sigh poor kagome...

Nice start, love the direction its heading. Keep up the good work & please update soon:)

yay i have been waiting sooooo long thanks update soon

Wow this is so interesting! I knew it would be a great fanfic just by the title. I love all the "scientific-y" titles...Like the fanfic where Kagome does research on Pheromones by Shadowsweaver1 called "My experiment" that one is a hoot! Good job on the drama and the humor. I cant wait to read more, I'll have this favorite-ed so I can keep track.

Good start. Can't wait to read the rest