I like it. Writing from the daughter's point of view is refreshing. The opening chapter got me interested in what's next and it ended with sufficient suspense. Furthermore, the writing is clear of distracting errors. I am looking forward to the update.:-)

I don't care what anyone else says, sometimes a short chapter is just perfect. When you've said just enough, it's time to cut it off, in my opinion. Now that was a well-written chapter. Yes, it left me wanting more, but that's the whole idea, right? Please, write more soon, I can't wait...