That was bittersweet!! I made me want to cry and cuddle all at the same time. Lovely.
mandy (Chapter 8) - Wed 09 Sep 2009
This was very well thought out...i loved it from start to finish, but i beileve a story from sesshomaru's point of view after she left would be an amazing sequel....good job on your story it was well written. I applaude u.
malom (Chapter 8) - Wed 09 Sep 2009
I'm glad I took the chance to read this. The scenes were poignant and haunting. I loved that you concluded the story with a promising reunion but did not go further. Knowing when to stop is important -- it demonstrates discipline. However, I would welcome a sequel.
Alpine (Chapter 8) - Wed 09 Sep 2009
This story was stunning.. I wept for Kagome... and Sessy.... I really hope you can find it in your heart to do a sequel.. It would be wonderful I am sure
Thanks for the great read
Hugs ^_^
malom (Chapter 6) - Tue 08 Sep 2009
That was painful. Inuyasha was cruel. I teared up reading this chapter.
malom (Chapter 5) - Tue 08 Sep 2009
Kagome inhaling the smoke is a nice touch to show she missed her time with Sesshomaru at Totosai's! Nice!
autumngold (Chapter 8) - Tue 08 Sep 2009
Thank you for writing this story! I'm so glad that I got to read it! Poor Kagome, I can't imagine the pain Kagome was going through, not belonging as a person or a demon. Even though Inuyasha was a jerk to her, more than a jerk to her, Sesshoumaru's actions must have hurt most of all. Fabulous story! Thank you for the happy ending! I just hope that she lets her family know that she's alive.
malom (Chapter 3) - Tue 08 Sep 2009
hehehehe, my own question got answered a few paragraphs down.
malom (Chapter 3) - Tue 08 Sep 2009
I'm a bit confused. Were you implying in paragraph 16, chapter 3 that Kagome lost her human modesty? It would appear she was training with Sesshomaru in the buff.
stars (Chapter 8) - Tue 08 Sep 2009
please updata
Right. We never found out what became of Inuyasha, either! So you have to write a sequel! (rationalization)
Please, write a sequel. I loved this story. They could stay in the modern era, or go back in time. The jewel IS inside Kagome, after all...
Poor Kagome! Now she knows how Inuyasha feels, being part one thing, part another. But she also knows that Inuyasha is not loyal to her, so there is no way they can be together.
sunset in love (Chapter 8) - Tue 08 Sep 2009
definitely a sequel.... Please (with very cute big sad puupy eyes looking at you, and whining every now and then... till you gave in...) pretty please... by the way, the explanation on inuyasha confession is not enough! yasha really need a couple of spanking and owe kaggie a greaat apology, NO, make it apologies.... and please let us have some definition as to how their lives after the 'make-up' and why sesshy had waited for so long to approach her... please, a SEQUEL? i'll have you know, one of the main reason i keep visiting AFF is because of your fic...
Oh, that's all for now? This story is soooo wonderful. The way Kagome was allowed to see Inuyasha and Sesshomaru, through a dog's eyes, created a revolution for her, showing Inuyasha's potential for the very behavior he is always accusing Sesshomaru of. I hope you can update soon, and I hope you make this a long story, I am enjoying it so much...
Oh, I love this Kagome! I love dogs. I don't usually like it when Kagome gets turned into a demon, or hanyou, as a way to get her together with Sesshomaru. But I sure to love how you made her into a dog. She is so sweet...
Oh, I love this!
I am thinking that Inuyasha knows that something happened between them. I wonder how Kagome will like having to be clothed all over again? I still love your story, and can't wait to read what you update with next. :)
stars (Chapter 4) - Mon 07 Sep 2009
please updata
katlady (Chapter 2) - Sun 06 Sep 2009
this is good this has been faved and DAME IT ALL YOU HAVE ME AT A CLIFFY I DEMAND AN UPDATE
that said up date soon
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